No field of study can advance significantly unless outsiders bring their knowledge and
experience to that field of study.
To advance any field of study it is important that some new ideas always get generated from experts of different fields of study. People from different fields of studies have contributed new ideas and innovation to the field that is different from them. I am consonant with the given topic and agree to the fact that transfer learning is one of the best ways to advance any field of study. Examples of this are numerous and include the areas of computer science, medicine, and engineering – all areas in which outsiders have contributed highly to advance the field.
Computer science is often considered as the field that has been contributed highly by mathematicians and engineers. History shows that mathematicians were primitive computer programmers. The field of computer science often known as data science is the implementation of statistical concepts in decision making. Another example is that computer scientists and engineers have contributed significantly in mathematics for complex calculations and helped in the advancement of mathematical theories and concepts.
Medicine is another example where outsiders have brought their knowledge to save millions of lives worldwide. The invention of sophisticated equipments and discovery of diseases would not have been this easy without the contribution of biomedical engineers who brought ideas of engineering and applied to medicine.
Engineering is also an example where outsiders have highly contributed. The processing of engineering comes along with the design. The designers bring their idea of designing items for different scenarios and apply them with engineers to build a successful product. For example, the designers recommend the shape, size, alignment, and color of products like spaceships and skyscrapers. It would require a lot of complex mathematics and engineering to achieve the final product.
Many might argue that it would create a lot of confusion and complexity if we let outsiders bring their knowledge. While it is impossible to say that cannot happen and it may be true that the field of study becomes more vague and misleading, it would open doors for upcoming generations to discover the reality. If the outsiders don’t bring their knowledge then it would be impossible to solve complex problems that are of different fields of study. In summary, indeed, outsiders contribute highly to the advancement of the field of study. Examples of computer science, engineering, and medicine all prove this.
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- As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate. 75
- Youngtown wildlife 59
- No field of study can advance significantly unless outsiders bring their knowledge andexperience to that field of study. 66
- We can usually learn much more from people whose views we share than from people whoseviews contradict our own. 50
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun might seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much might', 'a good deal of might'.
Suggestion: Much might; A good deal of might
...ering to achieve the final product. Many might argue that it would create a lot of con...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, then, while, for example, in summary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 14.8657303371 121% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 33.0505617978 85% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 58.6224719101 92% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 12.9106741573 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2115.0 2235.4752809 95% => OK
No of words: 388.0 442.535393258 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.45103092784 5.05705443957 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43821085614 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02048111119 2.79657885939 108% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 215.323595506 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.484536082474 0.4932671777 98% => OK
syllable_count: 658.8 704.065955056 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.3795646509 60.3974514979 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.75 118.986275619 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4 23.4991977007 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 5.21951772744 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.83258426966 207% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.304920943732 0.243740707755 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0967251332521 0.0831039109588 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0929913043046 0.0758088955206 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161614817425 0.150359130593 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.114532985693 0.0667264976115 172% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 14.1392134831 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 48.8420337079 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.33 12.1639044944 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.38706741573 102% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 100.480337079 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.8971910112 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.