More people decided to have children in their later age than in the past. Why?
Do advantages of this outweigh disadvantages?
Nowadays, more and more people tend to have children later than in the past. This essay will explain the reason why this trend is becoming popular and consider whether it brings more benefits than drawbacks, followed by a reasonable conclusion.
As clear as it can be seen, people have children later than in the old days. Because of many reasons that affect today life, people have changed their minds a lot, and that leads to this trend. The advantages, I believe, are also the reasons to this reality. As having children at an older age, people have a chance to prepare themselves. They can earn and save more money because it is expensive to raise a child in modern day. They also have more experience in dealing with the problem which happens unexpectedly every time. It means that they become more mature as they grow older.
Another reason is the environmental pollution. People are now really aware of the polluted surroundings around them, such as: contaminated water, polluted air, soil, etc. They are worried that their children could be affected by these bad conditions, therefore, it takes them a lot time to think about whether they should have a child or not. Moreover, it’s also the inequality in sex that leads to the late marriage, and as a result, children are born later.
In my opinion, this reality brings more disadvantages than advantages. If people give a baby a birth when they are old, they may not be able to ensure the child’s health. It’s also a matter if you have to bring up a child when you are not young enough because of your health. Furthermore, due to the gap between two generations, there will be many things to argue and misunderstand. That will lead to another extremely serious issue that needs to be solved in the future.
To conclude, the fact that there are more people decided to have children in their later age does not necessarily mean that it will bring more benefit. In my point of view, its disadvantages outweigh its advantages. In order to decrease the number of children who are born late, we need more effective solutions.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, may, moreover, really, so, therefore, such as, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 24.0651302605 183% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1745.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 363.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80716253444 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3649236973 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60041672157 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.539944903581 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 549.0 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.563896487 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.0952380952 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2857142857 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.57142857143 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.391855472834 0.244688304435 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113069129536 0.084324248473 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.114403073009 0.0667982634062 171% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.230375135721 0.151304729494 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.108761959192 0.056905535591 191% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.32 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.61 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.