It is important to preserve the beautiful buildings of the past, even if it will be expensive to do so. To what extent do you agree or disagree with it.
There has been a decline in interest of public to visit historical monuments because of many other entertainment places and bad conditions of these monuments. Some people believe that it is pertinent to preserve these places at any cost. This essay will discuss how this notion is correct.
To begin with, it is essential for a nation to be aware of their history in order to grow. To develop interest of people to visit historical places it is important to make these places attractive by maintaining it in better condition. For instance, Minar-e-Pakistan which has a symbolic value in creation of Pakistan was recently renovated and huge inflow of people was witnessed there. Therefore, to attract people to learn their history preservation of monuments is essential.
Secondly, past buildings in good condition will attract tourists which will generate more revenue. More influx of tourists will promote tourism which is helpful for a country in terms of revenue as well as its image building in the world. For example, pyramids in Egypt is a place for many international people to visit and learn about their history. Thus, by preserving historical buildings tourism is promoted which have many benefits for a country.
In conclusion, preserving old buildings helps in preserving history of a nation as well as promoting tourism. In my opinion, it is pertinent to maintain our historical places whatever the cost it requires.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 383, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'buildings'' or 'building's'?
Suggestion: buildings'; building's
...history. Thus, by preserving historical buildings tourism is promoted which have many ben...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as well as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 8.36945812808 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 31.9359605911 125% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1206.0 1207.87684729 100% => OK
No of words: 233.0 242.827586207 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17596566524 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90696013833 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91318635777 2.71678728327 107% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 139.433497537 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.545064377682 0.580463131201 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 382.5 379.143842365 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.65517241379 192% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.9130890984 50.4703680194 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 92.7692307692 104.977214359 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9230769231 20.9669160288 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.76923076923 7.25397266985 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.116572092109 0.242375264174 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0463808236553 0.0925447433944 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0418036190315 0.071462118173 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0702538517001 0.151781067708 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0289140345253 0.0609392437508 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 12.6369458128 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 53.1260098522 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.9458128079 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 11.5310837438 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.32886699507 103% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 55.0591133005 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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