The maps below show changes that took place in Youngsville in New Zealand over
a 25-year period from 1980 to 2005.
The map shows the developments occuring in Youngsville in New Zealand between 1980 and 2005.
It is noticeable from the maps that the biggest change that happened in Youngsville was the construction of stadium, skyscrapers and factories. Addtionally, houses completely disappeared by 2005.
In 1980, to the north of Alanah river, there were a hospital and a large park with a lake in the middle and a lot of trees around. Many residental houses were located in the east corner of the park, however , they were demolished in 2005 to make way for a stadium and a railway. In 2005, many trees were also chopped down.
In the south of Alanah river, there were many trees and residential houses in 1980, but they completely disappeared in 2005. Factories, skycrapers and warehouse were built in 2005. Meanwhile, airport, railway station and school still remained.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 208, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... in the east corner of the park, however , they were demolished in 2005 to make wa...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, so, still, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 723.0 965.302439024 75% => OK
No of words: 143.0 196.424390244 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05594405594 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.45807182446 3.73543355544 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83523901054 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 84.0 106.607317073 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.587412587413 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 209.7 283.868780488 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.0067895472 43.030603864 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.3333333333 112.824112599 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8888888889 22.9334400587 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.23603664747 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205976059018 0.215688989381 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0963503247219 0.103423049105 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.113318747537 0.0843802449381 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174622724471 0.15604864568 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.134073057746 0.0819641961636 164% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.2329268293 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.3012195122 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.77 11.4140731707 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 40.7170731707 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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