At any stage of life we can do charity work if we have intuition to do so. Child age is considered most sensitive, flexible and moldable age. The "Sanskar" or good things taught in this age will remain whole life. There are many ways to educate child one of that is community service. Many parents teach or ask them to do so. If school programms involve this type of free charity services in their curricular activities then every students will get to about the satisfaction of this job with this he can know about how they are lucky to have such a good environment provided by their parents and school. Charity work also can be done by spending time in orphanage. Child can spend time with younger kids and teach them painting and many sports games. Many parents keep their kids away from poor and difficult side of community. Students can know the community condition in their early age so than when they will be successful they can work to improve community with the help of charity work. Its good to know about every aspect of life to choose correct path for their own life. If community services are paid then students will work for money and they will never realize the feeling of being altruist. Unpaid services will teach student that rather than money there is lot to give and take.
When I was in finishing my school. I got to know about National Service Scheme (NSS). I was in turmoil weather to be part of it or not and then one of teacher forced me to participate in this programme. Through NSS we adopted a small village. We cleaned that village, planted many trees, organised many short programme to spread awareness about climate change and many healthy ways of living. From this charity work we got many things like confidence to face large group of members, it improved my communications skills. Furthermore untill now people from that village are in contact they say that we have changed their concept of life. This feeling of satisfaction is precious. Few days ago I met a man from that village he was drug addicted but our programme made him to stay away from drugs now he owns a small clothing store.
For child such experiences are necessary in my opinion this unpaid charity services will help to improve kids as well as our community. In my opinion charity works have more benefits than harm. Such schemes will improve the relation between parents, kids and community. Some might not get improved but we must focus on positive sides if we raise few good its enough for better future.
- #6 If you could change one important thing about your hometown, what would you change? Use reasons and specific examples to support your answer. 70
- competition 78
- In many countries the proportion of old people is steadily increasing. Some think this good, while other believe this a problem for a country. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. 60
- Pablo alto building usage theories 85
- Some people spend their entire lives in one place. Others move a number of times throughout their lives, looking for a better job, house, community, or even climate. Which do you prefer: staying in one place or moving in search of another place? Use reaso 60
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1057, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to correct'
Suggestion: to correct
...ow about every aspect of life to choose correct path for their own life. If community s...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “When” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...oney there is lot to give and take. When I was in finishing my school. I got to ...
^^^^
Line 3, column 520, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Furthermore,
..., it improved my communications skills. Furthermore untill now people from that village are...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, so, then, well, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 54.0 43.0788530466 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 60.0 52.1666666667 115% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2077.0 1977.66487455 105% => OK
No of words: 446.0 407.700716846 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.65695067265 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5955099915 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44806190659 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 212.727598566 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.497757847534 0.524837075471 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 653.4 618.680645161 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 51.5360648122 48.9658058833 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.8846153846 100.406767564 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1538461538 20.6045352989 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.65384615385 5.45110844103 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177508269407 0.236089414692 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0490903393393 0.076458572812 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0417692935243 0.0737576698707 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121536723884 0.150856017488 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0445905322041 0.0645574589148 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 11.7677419355 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.45 10.9000537634 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.21 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 86.8835125448 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.