Few artist ever manage to achieve Fame, let alone a liveable wage . Often artists struggle to make ends meet for most of their lifes. For this reason some people believe that it is irresponsible for a parents to encourage their children to pursue an artistic career .
To what extent do you agree with this view?
Nowadays, very few artists can obtain fame. Artists very often struggle to make ends meet throughout their life . Some people believe that it is irresponsible for a parents to encourage their children to pursue a career in that. I totally disagree with the statement instead,they should be encouraged to take up artistic careers. This essay will discuss why parents should encourage children to take as a career although the struggle they have to do.
To begin with, parents would like their children's career to be safe in which they can secure wage and earn a decent amount of money for the living . However, if a child has the natural learning towards art and creativity, they should be encouraged. Art is an essential part of society . Artists like designers are needed from the field of fashion,architecture and Technology. Artistic careers have a wide range of job opportunities. For example ,as fashion is considered a major thing nowadays people like to pursue career in fashion. They form new designs of clothes and shoes.
On the other hand , art offers a variety of careers which other careers do not. Art is a means of expression and it builds a cultural heritage that everyone can enjoy. People who do not have artistic talents can also enjoy art. Parents should encourage their children if they have passion and enthusiasm for art . For example my friend who loves architecture is supported by her parents because she has passion towards your work and her and her parents are happy for her.
In conclusion , parents should always encourage their children on taking up good Careers but, it depends on the child on what career to choose and which will benefit them in the future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, thus, for example, in conclusion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1408.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92307692308 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70968114862 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.555944055944 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 430.2 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.7639640819 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.2222222222 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8888888889 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.22222222222 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.31866523201 0.244688304435 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106936470779 0.084324248473 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.107299946356 0.0667982634062 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200387912622 0.151304729494 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.118821748633 0.056905535591 209% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 13.0946893788 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.96 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.