Art is seen from a philosophical point of view rather than a practical viewpoint unlike science. There is a war of words for a topic about encouraging child to persue an artistic career. I personally do not welcome the notion of persuing a career in arts, supported by ample of reasons.
The most prominent reason is that have a hand to mouth existence, terming the byword "starving artist", as art is produced purely at a level of imagination whether it uplifts the viewers is questionable. The artist is just unaware as anyone else as to what the end product of creation will be, when he is actually in the process of creating. In the end when the product is not as the per expectations of the viewers, it can be regarded as a piece of a crap, keeping the existence of the artist at stake. Thus it symbolizes that when the survival is a risk parents do not seem to encourage their kid to persue arts as a career in this competitative world.
In addition, there are handful of people who connect and understand the value of an art, while majority of population regard it as a vague formation. Although few artists like Salvador Dali, M.F. Hussain, etcetera have gained fame, making them earn enormous wealth, following a path of struggle and discovery. In today's world where people are tempted to earn bucks in no time and as art industry is not perceived as a money generating industry people tend to refrain building apt future.
In conclusion, I would like to emphasize that in the contemporary world, where people are imfactuated by lavish lifestyle, building a career in arts should not be encouraged unless and until governments create plethora of job opportunities with moderate to high paying skills.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, if, so, thus, while, as to, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1431.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80201342282 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89994439464 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604026845638 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 455.4 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.1352341956 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.090909091 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0909090909 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.81818181818 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204831853391 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0704973640019 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.060168551866 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100872220068 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0461827692834 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 50.2224549098 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.86 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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