Do you agree or disagree with the following statements? Teacher were more appreciated and valued by society in the past than they were nowadays.
It is an evident fact that the educational system is one of the most important segments of society. People pay remarkable attention to academic backgrounds. Among these factors, teachers have a major role throughout history. Some people argue that these days teachers are not praised and appreciated as before. However, others disagree with this assertion and believe that the place of teachers in communities is still valuable. I personally contend that society still acclaims the pivotal role of teachers in individual's prosperity for two reasons.
First, teachers are motivators and mentors for students. In this modern era, due to the technology advancements, there are numerous number of new entertainments and distractions for students. By providing an organized and interesting plan for students, they can be motivated and encouraged to spend more time on studying without discontent. my own experience is a compelling example of this. My friend's son who is a 12 years old kid, always loved to spend his time playing video games on his tablet and smartphone. His teacher played a major role in changing his habits and interesting him in studying and even acquiring a new language. My friend and his wife as parents appreciate the role of their son’s teacher in his prosperity. Therefore, societies and especially parents are always facing similar situations and still respect and appreciate the effective role of the teachers.
Second, another equally noteworthy point is the scarcity of dependable sources of information. Despite the fact that these days we can find a lot of information about a subject on the internet by only doing some clicks, the validity and reliability of the information is still under question. Teachers can play as reliable sources for the information that our children are required. For example, in my country, there are some famous private teachers which due to their impressive background experience, people regard them as persons who have the highest level of social status in the community. They receive a noticeable amount of money for teaching children as a private teacher and parents pay these amounts without any reluctance. Thus, despite the availability of information on the internet, society needs reliable sources for the education of their children.
In conclusion, although there are some people who assert that teachers have lost their influential role from the perspective of societies, I believe that teachers are still praised by people. Because they not only play as a motivator for children but also considered as a reliable source for children education.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 342, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: My
...re time on studying without discontent. my own experience is a compelling example ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, second, so, still, therefore, thus, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2212.0 1977.66487455 112% => OK
No of words: 415.0 407.700716846 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33012048193 4.8611393121 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51348521516 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93928497066 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.525301204819 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 692.1 618.680645161 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.1775356728 48.9658058833 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.545454545 100.406767564 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8636363636 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.22727272727 5.45110844103 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.115616851445 0.236089414692 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0366649515049 0.076458572812 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0295938525591 0.0737576698707 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.075627562986 0.150856017488 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0242337527741 0.0645574589148 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 11.7677419355 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 58.1214874552 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 10.9000537634 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.1 8.01818996416 113% => OK
difficult_words: 120.0 86.8835125448 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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