Essay topics: Many university students live with their families, while others live away from home because their universities are in different places. What are the advantages and disadvantages of both situations?
computers have been playing an essential role in the field of education in recent years. Although it cannot be denied the positive outcome when applying computer in educational environment, there are certain areas of education which computer cannot replace a traditional teacher.
On one hand, there are cases when computers use is necessary. Regarding the course of computer learning for students who study high school or below in some countries, computer is a vital tool for those to practice. it is considered as an indispensable mean to reinforce the student’s knowledge related to the lesson. By interacting directly on the computer, learners will be able to understand the lecture thoroughly and remember it longer. Furthermore, students whose majors are it or film editor are in need of the use of computers. Without the computers, it is hardly to imagine how those learners are going to interprete the lectures.
On the other hand, teachers can hardly be replaced by computer in subjects required reasoning. To illustrate, computer is able to solve a mathematics issue from easy to elementary quickly in few seconds, however, it is impossible to give the reason to the answer. In the contrary, human teachers can explain to learners why things is happened that way and show students the method to accomplish the task. These are things that computers cannot do as they are only programmed to provided accurate answer. Moreover, making use of computers in areas such as researching case studies is almost impractical due to the reason that a case study requires researchers to use their logical mind rather than computer.
In conclusion, computers is beneficial to education, but in some circumstances, it benefits should not be taken into account, and the role of a human teacher is irreplaceable in such cases.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Computers
computers have been playing an essential role in ...
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Line 3, column 216, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
... is a vital tool for those to practice. it is considered as an indispensable mean ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, moreover, regarding, second, so, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1537.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19256756757 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99332522309 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570945945946 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 495.0 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.9691987453 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.785714286 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1428571429 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.21428571429 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0378978209985 0.244688304435 15% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0134899188935 0.084324248473 16% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0139018726572 0.0667982634062 21% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0190767684024 0.151304729494 13% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0199489144117 0.056905535591 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.11 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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