We do not have the chance to chose where we born but we have the chance to change the place where we live. There are many people who love to living in a country whereas other half prefers to live in a city. Both city and country life have their own advantages, however in my view, living in a city has myriad advantages over living in a country. My opinion is based on educational, social and economical reasons.
Educationally, studying in a city has numerous advantages over studying in a country. In a country, the facilities of a school/collage is very limited because there is no great income owing to the economic conditions. On the other hand, studying in a city procure one many sources such as big prosperous laboratories, wealthy libraries, better internship possibilities and more. This is one of the biggest reasons that students chose to study in a city.
Socially, I would like to visit many places, go to cafes, cinema, theatre and exhibitions, hang with a lot of friends and meet new people. A city life can provide me those, but in a country life I assume that I would have to be stuck to my home and spend my time in there. Maybe some people are okay with that notion but I do not like a monoton life so, I would like to be able to go wherever I want to go.
Economically, living a country life limits job opportunities. Mostly, people needs to take care of their homes, farms and their gardens and these tasks take a lot of time. In general, countries placed far away from city center and city centers are the places where one can get a job easily. Controversially, the chance of getting higher salaries and life standards is more in cities. Furthermore, choosing a job which is more suitable to us is easier in a city since there are a lot of work branches.
Both life styles have their own advantages and disadvantages but these conditions are totally depend on the persons personality/character, desires and expectations from life. Since I am an energetic person who do not like to live a monoton and stable life, I would exactly prefer to live in a city.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 394, Rule ID: ECONOMICAL_ECONOMIC[1]
Message: Did you mean 'economic' (=connected with economy)?
Suggestion: economic
...ion is based on educational, social and economical reasons. Educationally, studying in ...
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Line 9, column 95, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'depended'.
Suggestion: depended
...ntages but these conditions are totally depend on the persons personality/character, d...
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Line 9, column 109, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...se conditions are totally depend on the persons personality/character, desires and expe...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, may, so, whereas, in general, such as, in my view, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 43.0788530466 67% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 52.1666666667 105% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.0752688172 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1715.0 1977.66487455 87% => OK
No of words: 375.0 407.700716846 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.57333333333 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40055868397 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88046169139 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 212.727598566 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.501333333333 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 582.3 618.680645161 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.1211545366 48.9658058833 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.2777777778 100.406767564 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8333333333 20.6045352989 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 5.45110844103 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17523935607 0.236089414692 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.059456085937 0.076458572812 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0695816309982 0.0737576698707 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.096432007404 0.150856017488 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0549952087111 0.0645574589148 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 11.7677419355 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.23 10.9000537634 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 86.8835125448 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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