On recent holiday you lost a valuable item. Fortunately you have travel insurance to cover the cost of anything lost.
Write a letter the manager of your insurance company. In your letter
- Describe the item you lost
- Explain how you lost it
- Tell insurance company what you would like them to do
Dear Sir,
My name is Amit Sadhana.I hold a travel insurance policy of your company, Scheme number B1X234.I am writing this letter to intimate an incident of lost item on vacation.
On the last weekend, I was on pilligrammage to Shri Mata Vaishnav Devi temple, Jammu.During my evening halt point at Shrinagar, I realized that my backpack is missing, while I was having dinner hotel lobby.I searched with hotel staff but had no luck.I lodged a complaint with hotel management.
The sack was camping bag with various sections for luggage and food.It was from premium brand Woodlands.I had very strong emotional attachment with the bag, as it was gifted by my elder brother who is an army officer.
As I remember the purpose of travel insurance policy, which covers the lost items and belongings, hence I would like to initiate the claim process.I request you to file a settlement claim against the loss occurred of an item.Further my urge is to cover the belongings that lost during the processs as well; such as, clothes and shoes.
Looking forward swift action in this matter.
Yours faithfully,
Amit Sadhana.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, look, well, while, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 955.0 937.175257732 102% => OK
No of words: 185.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16216216216 4.54256449028 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68801715136 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71523580531 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 127.690721649 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.724324324324 0.622605031667 116% => OK
syllable_count: 281.7 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 12.6804123711 47% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 16.3608247423 183% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 114.808173344 44.8134815571 256% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 159.166666667 76.5299724578 208% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 30.8333333333 16.8248392259 183% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 4.34317383033 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 2.54639175258 393% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207635542673 0.216113520407 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0918451090276 0.0766984524023 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106377331734 0.0603063233224 176% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.099237250917 0.12726935374 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.118219400007 0.0580467560999 204% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.3 8.37731958763 218% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 49.49 70.7449484536 70% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 7.45979381443 185% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.24 8.71597938144 152% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.99 7.59969072165 131% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 41.2886597938 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 8.62886597938 209% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 14.0 8.54432989691 164% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 8.15463917526 172% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.