Some people say it is the best for children to start learning a foreign language as soon as they start school. Other people say it is better to start later. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
Opinions are divided on whether it is better for children to study a another language beside mother tongue in the beginning at school or later. Personally, I am agreement with the later view even though the other one also shows some positive aspects.
The option to start to learn foreign language as soon as they go to school is attractive for some reasons. One benefit is that young children are more likely to learn language than adolescents or adults. Generally speaking, they do not work very hard to learn new language. They just repeat what they hear and that all enough for them to learn it well. Then by the time they reach to 9 or 10 years old, they can speak at an advanced level.
However, I believe it is more beneficial to learn foreign language until latter. Firstly, very young children might be confused between languages and tend to mix these languages when they speak. In addition, they can have troubles if these languages use different alphabets. Secondly, in my country, there is a shortage of language teachers. Therefore, most schools do not have enough teachers to give language lessons to very young children.
In conclusion, while studying foreign language early shows some undeniable positive aspects, it seems to me that learning latter is smarter choice.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 68, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Line 1, column 207, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ment with the later view even though the other one also shows some positive aspec...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, well, while, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1072.0 1615.20841683 66% => OK
No of words: 218.0 315.596192385 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91743119266 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5150000297 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.637614678899 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 327.6 506.74238477 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.6463747229 49.4020404114 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 82.4615384615 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7692307692 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.69230769231 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.320543238189 0.244688304435 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109903833168 0.084324248473 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0781870568711 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173048897597 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0564044613497 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.96 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 78.4519038076 57% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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