Many people have difficulty maintaining a healthy diet. What are the causes and solutions
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Many people have difficulty maintaining a healthy diet. What are the causes and solutions
Introduction...
The essentiality of good food to health cannot be overemphasize. It has been noticed that majority of the populace lacks the ability to support better dishes. This essay will analyze the financial incapacitation and health related reasons as a cause ,then will go ahead to proffer solutions.<span class="hiddenSpellError" pre=""></span> On the one hand, financial challenge is one among various reasons behind poor dieting. When an individual is met with such issues, he will not only be denied of his regular three square meals but his food will be devoid of the pertinent ingredients necessary to promote good health. A prime example, is a survey in 2010, among Northern inhabitants who were dieting poorly due to financial constraints. Furthermore, bad health is another point to unhealthy eating. There are disease conditions which do not permits people to eat balanced diet. This is seen in people with cardiovascular disease and others form of heart diseases like coronary arterial disease where the patient is prevented from meat-eating aswell as consuming carbonated drinks which has proteins and vital minerals to help keep his food in check. There is no doubt that all these culminates to bad eating behaviour.
<span class="hiddenSpellError" pre=""></span> On the other hand, almost, to every problem there is always a solution. Firstly, Financial aides not only from the government but also from charitable organizations and well-meaning people will go a long way to curb this menace. To exemplified<span class="hiddenSuggestion" pre="To "></span>, Developed countries are supporting it citizens with monthly stipend to make sure sustenance of healthy food. Similarly, Talking people with challenging medical diseases into available substitutes of food and food products will help a great deal. For instance, patients with Hypertension can be talk on replacing meat with fish because it has almost similar protein content.
To sum up, This essay have discussed the health as well as the financial reasons of poor dieting. Solutions ranges from monetary assistance from government and charity organisation aswell as health education from people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, similarly, so, then, well, for instance, no doubt, as well as, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2006.0 1615.20841683 124% => OK
No of words: 348.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.76436781609 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31911543099 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.22950241897 2.80592935109 151% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614942528736 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 599.4 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.862674819 49.4020404114 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.444444444 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3333333333 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1643884453 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.070426752953 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.136631254335 0.0667982634062 205% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.287589342116 0.151304729494 190% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.411395244648 0.056905535591 723% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.13 12.4159519038 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.66 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 78.4519038076 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.