Young people are committing more crimes. Discuss the causes and solutions for this problem.
Recently, there has been an alarming trend of juvenile delinquency. This can be explained by many underpinning factors such as the lack of attention from parents and the harsh living conditions. Therefore, there are several practical solutions that could be taken into consideration such as incorporating ethic lessons in schools and allocating more funding in some essential services namely education and social security.
To begin with, there is no doubt that the increase of youth those are committing crimes is caused by various factors. First of all, these children tend to suffer some difficulties such as the difficult living conditions and they cannot afford to live a normal childhood. As a result, this group may also be forced to earn a living by illegal means. Another note-worthy reason is that their parents fail in nurturing and guiding their offspring what is right or wrong due to they may be too busy with work or lack of knowledge. Furthermore, children and teenagers may not know some important skills or the right things and they have tendency to break the law.
There are several actions that could be taken to solve this issue. First, the educators can design the incorporate ethics lessons into the national schools curriculum. This can be attributed to help young people recognize the importance of following the rules and behaving responsibly in society. Furthermore, these children can understand the consequences of breaking laws or committing crimes. In addition, the government and politicians should spend more funding to boost the quality of some crucial categories namely education and social security. As more people can be accessible to better education and security, the number of juvenile who are committing crimes may witness a reduction in size.
In conclusion, the lack of parental guidance and poverty are the leading reasons behind the rise in juvenile crime. Therefore, the importance of taking actions to prevent this increase can be regarded as the major concern. I strongly believe that educators can redesign the education system by incorporating ethics lessons and some crucial skills for children and parents should spend more time for teaching their child.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'schools'' or 'school's'?
Suggestion: schools'; school's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, may, so, therefore, in addition, in conclusion, no doubt, such as, as a result, first of all, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1866.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 352.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30113636364 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33147354134 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7970939391 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.53125 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 578.7 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.907480736 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.764705882 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7058823529 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.35294117647 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183083337769 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0563081540857 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0531583125377 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107616342119 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0452320027414 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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