Global environmental issues are the responsibility of rich nations, not of poorer nations. Do you agree with this opinion?
Climate change is among the most serious problems that people are confronting with nowadays. Nations with vigorous economy are advocated to own a greater responsibility to address the climate issues such as global warming. In my opinion, industrialized countries are recommended to collaborate with the developing ones in order to eliminate the environmental issues that are posing threats to the existence of our planet.
There are several explanations why the cooperation of all nations regardless of their economic status will be the pivotal factor in the fight against menace relating to environment. Firstly, since developed nations are more experienced in tackling environmental problems, they can help establish native organizations providing regular activities aiming for a greener world, hence arousing the interest in protecting the environment among citizens in the developing countries. Furthermore, thanks to the affluence of the developed nations, the developing ones can be supported with ground-breaking green technologies like solar or nuclear energy to produce electricity. These categories of power are not only non-hazardous for the inhabitants’ environment, but also significantly advantageous for the companies invested in these regions as they will eventually acquire reputation and revenues.
That is not to say sharing this enormous responsibility for all countries is always beneficial on account of the ensuing reasons. A number of individuals working for local official authorities may take advantage of the money subsidized by the advanced countries for personal infamous purposes, which results in the corruption and the loss of credibility. Besides, despite the potential advantages of the industrialized countries’ innovative green technologies, they cannot ensure the efficiency when applying at all developed countries, thus a substantial financial and human resources will be required in researching contemporary conditions of a specific country before implementing comprehensively.
In conclusion, climate change is a grave problem that needs measures with a great sense of urgency. If joint endeavour is made and all of the aforementioned problems are solved, fruitful results will be obtained soon.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 132, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...urgency. If joint endeavour is made and all of the aforementioned problems are solved, fru...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, if, may, so, thus, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1934.0 1615.20841683 120% => OK
No of words: 324.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.96913580247 5.12529762239 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.46420061068 2.80592935109 123% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.62962962963 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 618.3 506.74238477 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 76.0602831093 49.4020404114 154% => OK
Chars per sentence: 161.166666667 106.682146367 151% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.33333333333 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138627709038 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0510585679967 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0500145542269 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0796773699288 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0673392214531 0.056905535591 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.2 13.0946893788 154% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 18.69 50.2224549098 37% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.4 11.3001002004 154% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.64 12.4159519038 142% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.36 8.58950901804 132% => OK
difficult_words: 131.0 78.4519038076 167% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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