Some people think planning future is a waste of time and people should focus on the present. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
People have different views about whether we should focus on the present or spend time and energy on planning for the future. In my opinion, both kinds of planning play important roles in making life better.
On the one hand, we can not deny the importance of planning for the future. To be more specific, if we have detailed and effective plans for our future, we have the motivation of following these steps to reach our goals. Whenever we complete one more stage of the plans which we designed before, we know exactly where we are and what we lack so that we can improve ourselves every day and prepare better for the next stages. For example, my neighbor who decides to become a sale manager in the next two years has made detailed arrangements for all her jobs so that she can gain knowledge as well as experience to fit the criteria of her intended situation. Besides, with a wise plan for the future, we can avoid facing disaster because when we get older and get married, we have to take care of the whole family, pay bills and expenses. Money can be an serious problem if one in the family catchs rare disease and has to have an operation that costs a fortune. So, at that time, unless we plan to earn and save enough money before it happens, the situation would be out of control.
On the other hand, living for the moment is crucial for all of us to have happiness in this stressful life. Enjoying the present, for example, going to the cafeteria with our close-knit soulmates to tell them our problems or playing with our children on the weekend is the real meaning of life. Lots of people spend all their time working hard to get rich and give their children cash to buy new clothes and new toys, yet those teenagers feel angry at their parents thanks to a lack of care. Additionally, we are all human, so always focusing on the future as a machine follows its program is impossible. Taking a break before going back to work is essential.
Eventually, I think planning the future as well as enjoying the moment have their own importance.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, if, so, well, as to, for example, i think, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 24.0651302605 175% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1682.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 374.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.49732620321 5.12529762239 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3976220399 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37257245623 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.558823529412 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 534.6 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.7210234737 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.133333333 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9333333333 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.4 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.117729708129 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0491190498018 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0638582647068 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111166508705 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0653789726358 0.056905535591 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 50.2224549098 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.12 12.4159519038 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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