The line graph shows the average daily maximum temperatures for Auckland and Christchurch, two cities in New Zealand, and London and Edinburgh, two cities in United Kingdom.
Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The diagram compare the average highest temperature of 2 cities in New Zealand, and 2 cities in United Kingdom(UK) the months of the year.
From the line graph, it is clear that, the temperature in New Zealand and UK are contradictory. UK is colder than New Zealand in winter and New Zealand is hotter than UK in summer.
The difference between the temperature 2 cities in New Zealand: Auckland and Christchurch are not too much, the maximum difference is around 5 degree in July. London and Edinburgh in UK also same like that, the disparity occur highest in July and 5 degree different. During december to march in New Zealand is the hottest time in year, the temperature is from 21 to 25 celsius, while at that time in UK is the winter, the greatest temperature is 10 celsius. From April to August New Zealand become colder but the coldest time in July is just 15 degree in Auckland and 10 degree in Christchurch not too cold compare to the lowest temperature in London 6 degree. In the period New Zealand become colder, is the rising temperature time in year in England, the temperature increase from 10 degree and reach the top at 22.5 degree in London, lower than the hottest temperature in New Zealand.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 13, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'compares'.
Suggestion: compares
The diagram compare the average highest temperature of 2 ci...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 995.0 965.302439024 103% => OK
No of words: 215.0 196.424390244 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.62790697674 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69985477245 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 106.607317073 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.441860465116 0.547539520022 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 308.7 283.868780488 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.4589476233 43.030603864 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.375 112.824112599 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.875 22.9334400587 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 5.23603664747 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258170965298 0.215688989381 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.142118047668 0.103423049105 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0695615175778 0.0843802449381 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.20664973228 0.15604864568 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0497330839672 0.0819641961636 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.2329268293 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.87 11.4140731707 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.