Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is more important for governments to spend money to improve Internet access than to improve public transportation. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
I am absolutely agreed. The art is the reflection of the spritual condition of a society. If the governments are to have an active society with delicate behavioral patterns, they should not take the artists for granted. There are some reasons that support my opinion as follows:
First of all, youths like art and at the onset of their self-recognition, they will try to learn a special art, such as music, painting etc. I mean the dependancy between young people and the arts is indispensable and no one can ignore it. Goverments, as the responsibles for all of the people and their lesuire time, should pay enough attention to the people who want to make their life more colorful, just bay learning an art. The authorities, govermental orgonizations, have payed ample attention to the athletics and it is the turn of the arts.
How the majority of the people can take advantages of an activity or national budgets? a proper answer to this question is the second reason. Investing on athletics, for instance olympic caravanes or world championships, would not be useful for the vast range of the people. The capitals could serve them better than the athletics. Moreover, neither a person learn an art properly or doing it just for fun, the interaction between him or her and the arts would affect the ethics and the life expectancy well. When its come to me, if I wanted to enterench the necessity of this issue and change the mindsets of the authorities, I would ask the beginer question. So spending money to improving the arts and cultivating them could be useful for all of people, in contrast, spending money to developing athletics would be good just for athlets.
The last reason, is that the people got used to considering public aspects of the any investigation. They are so critical and are to challenge the goverments. Assining money to the arts increases the popularity of the goverment. So spending money for this important issue is turned to a flagship for the goverment by the community trends and its mentalities.
All in all, I do not mean that the athletics are not useful; They can fill lesuire time of many people and excite them. But in comparison with the arts, they do not deserve such a huge budget.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 277, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...it. Goverments, as the responsibles for all of the people and their lesuire time, should p...
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Line 3, column 87, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: A
...ges of an activity or national budgets? a proper answer to this question is the s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, moreover, second, so, well, for instance, i mean, in contrast, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 43.0788530466 72% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1843.0 1977.66487455 93% => OK
No of words: 386.0 407.700716846 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77461139896 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43248042346 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81631956343 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 212.727598566 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.533678756477 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 575.1 618.680645161 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.3709428713 48.9658058833 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.15 100.406767564 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3 20.6045352989 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.45110844103 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170152644204 0.236089414692 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0467018831311 0.076458572812 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0491429200347 0.0737576698707 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0936364831763 0.150856017488 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0515054746019 0.0645574589148 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 11.7677419355 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 86.8835125448 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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