*Some governments spend a lot of public money training individuals to be successful in international sporting events and hosting them. Some people believe that this money should be spent on things that will benefit the general public instead.To what extent do you agree or disagree?*
Needless to say that sports plays a major role in overall development and well-being of an individual. At the same time the international sporting events provides a platform to individuals so that they step-up and display their talent in front of whole world. I would partially agree with the statement as the need is to have a balance of money being spent of both sporting events or on general public.The essay would examine more facts.
The international sporting events also help in boosting country's economy, as it generates the direct and indirect jobs. Tourists and sports enthusiasts travel from multiple locations and countries to witness such a gala event. Hence to facilitate such a huge event and massive gathering, government creates necessary infrastructure in terms of roads, hotels and public transport. Moreover, the sporting events also generate a lot of revenue from TV and satellite rights, which is a form of earning for government.
The general public expects better infrastructure, better roads, work opportunities and good lifestyle, for which government spends money anyway. The sporting events also motivate younger generation to take up sports by featuring their favorite and local sports star, which ultimately is one of the building block of a healthier nation.
However, a country must not be spending money on training individuals and on sporting events extravagantly, especially at a cost of welfare of general public. If the citizens are unable to meet their physiological and other basic needs, country must be focusing on that. That must be foremost priority for any country. To conclude, i would say that its commendable for governments to spend money to promote sports and train the athletes on its own cost, while taking all factors in consideration and not to go overboard with it.
- Task 1You and your family are living in rented accommodation in an English speaking country. You are not satisfied with the condition of some of the furniture.Write a letter to your landlord. In your letterintroduce yourselfexplain what is wrong with the 84
- *Some governments spend a lot of public money training individuals to be successful in international sporting events and hosting them. Some people believe that this money should be spent on things that will benefit the general public instead.To what exten 84
- Task 1You and your family are living in rented accommodation in an English speaking country. You are not satisfied with the condition of some of the furniture.Write a letter to your landlord. In your letterintroduce yourselfexplain what is wrong with the 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...countries to witness such a gala event. Hence to facilitate such a huge event and mas...
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Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
... form of earning for government. The general public expects better infrastructure, better r...
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Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...tly, especially at a cost of welfare of general public. If the citizens are unable to meet the...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...s are unable to meet their physiological and other basic needs, country must be f...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, anyway, hence, however, if, moreover, so, thus, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1536.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24232081911 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95421227232 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.60409556314 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 470.7 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.0212818197 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.153846154 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5384615385 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.29433740659 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104299295855 0.084324248473 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0709601280818 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176973198561 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0428831573065 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.31 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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