Task 1
You and your family are living in rented accommodation in an English speaking country. You are not satisfied with the condition of some of the furniture.
Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter
introduce yourself
explain what is wrong with the furniture
say what action you would like the landlord to take
Dear Mark,
Hope this letter finds you in radiant and high spirits.
I have moved to your apartment, L-129, Museum street lately with my wife and kids.The location is great and my family is loving the sea-view from the apartment.
However, we are facing few problems with pre-existing furniture in the apartment. The furniture smells funny and I am afraid that the wooden chairs also have termites or bed-bugs in them. We tried applying pesticides in the tiny holes and sun dried the furniture, but that was futile. This has made me worried about well-being of my family.
Since, as you are aware that we agreed upon rent of apartment keeping in consideration that apartment is fully furnished. Appreciate, if you could replace this ageing furniture with a new one. As I do not want to overburden you, I'll be fine even if you want to reduce the total number of wooden chairs, provided you replace them with brand new chairs.
Please call me or text me on the contact number that you already have, if you want me to send any pictures or you need more details. I anticipate your positive response on the proposal.
Hope to hear from you soon.
Yours faithfully,
Eshaan Sharma
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- Task 1You and your family are living in rented accommodation in an English speaking country. You are not satisfied with the condition of some of the furniture.Write a letter to your landlord. In your letterintroduce yourselfexplain what is wrong with the 84
- Task 1You and your family are living in rented accommodation in an English speaking country. You are not satisfied with the condition of some of the furniture.Write a letter to your landlord. In your letterintroduce yourselfexplain what is wrong with the 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 82, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...eum street lately with my wife and kids.The location is great and my family is lovi...
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Line 4, column 118, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...ids.The location is great and my family is loving the sea-view from the apartment. Howe...
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Line 6, column 229, Rule ID: ILL_I_LL[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I'll'?
Suggestion: I'll
...ne. As I do not want to overburden you, Ill be fine even if you want to reduce the ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, well, i am afraid
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 981.0 937.175257732 105% => OK
No of words: 206.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76213592233 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50425690925 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 127.690721649 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.645631067961 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 301.5 290.88556701 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 1.83505154639 272% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.4471826345 44.8134815571 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.4615384615 76.5299724578 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8461538462 16.8248392259 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.46153846154 4.34317383033 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185769353468 0.216113520407 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0647816041175 0.0766984524023 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0443305780401 0.0603063233224 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0785851669171 0.12726935374 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0317869267544 0.0580467560999 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 8.37731958763 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.03 8.71597938144 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.