In any field of inquiry, the beginner is more likely than the expert to make important contributions.
Author’s claim “In any field of inquiry, the beginner is more likely than the expert to make important contribution”, is partly correct as without the wisdom of the experts, beginner might not able to achieve surest success. In any realm, experience is most important thing and both experience and knowledge spur any big contribution in any field. On the outset, I would like to show discordance towards the author’s claim. Following are some of the reasons.
Firstly, Consider a realm of business, Would Microsoft able to achieve enduring success if Bill gates had not contributed his knowledge, time and experience? Today Microsoft is considered as one of the best company because of contribution of Bill gates. Consider another example, Steves Jobs when left Apple Company, there was great decline in the value or purchase of Apple products, it is after Steves Jobs again joined the Apple Company, the products of apple have started enticing people. Thus, experts are the person, who through their imagination and experience contribute towards the success. Beginner are the people, though work hard to achieve lucrative career might not come up with the ideas that experts would. Thus, in my opinion, in any field of inquiry, compared to beginner expert contribute the most.
Secondly, Consider another scenario, when people wander around to seek good job position, the most important thing recruiters take into consideration is years of experience because experience trains a person to handle complex and dutiful job. In Professors also the most experienced professor would able to deliver concepts in more articulate way compared to verdant professor who have just started the journey as a professor. In the field of arts also, an artists rely on experts comments rather than some beginner. Thus, author claim that beginner is more likely than the expert to make important contribution holds wrong as beginner might work hard but experience which is very important in any field to succeed is pour by experts.
However, Experts were one day a beginner and in a field of discovery, innovations, etc. there is no beginner or experts. Each and every person is most likely to come up some novel theory, innovation, etc. Consider an example,Wright brothers were the beginners, they haven’t excel in the aerocraft field but still they made a remarkable contribution by introducing a first flight in air. Thus, innovations or discoveries doesn’t require experience in that field and beginner as well as experts have same probability of making important contribution in any field.
On wrapping up, Experts are the person who have wisdom and can proved as an important asset in success of any business whereas in making nay innovation or discoveries, both beginner as well as experts have same probability in making contribution.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: achieve the surest
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Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'is'.
Suggestion: is
...ontribute towards the success. Beginner are the people, though work hard to achieve...
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Suggestion: and
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, still, thus, well, whereas, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.5258426966 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 33.0505617978 30% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 58.6224719101 104% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 12.9106741573 155% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2411.0 2235.4752809 108% => OK
No of words: 456.0 442.535393258 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28728070175 5.05705443957 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62105577807 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92823438173 2.79657885939 105% => OK
Unique words: 223.0 215.323595506 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.489035087719 0.4932671777 99% => OK
syllable_count: 760.5 704.065955056 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.38483146067 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.4853816519 60.3974514979 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.55 118.986275619 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8 23.4991977007 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.75 5.21951772744 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.413417303108 0.243740707755 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.131774258196 0.0831039109588 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.138535706792 0.0758088955206 183% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.260778840036 0.150359130593 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0931200818092 0.0667264976115 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 14.1392134831 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 48.8420337079 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 12.1743820225 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.7 12.1639044944 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.38706741573 100% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 100.480337079 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4 Out of 6
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