Everybody has the potential to commit a crime in the predisposing situations. So the idea of isolating the criminals from the society totally and sending them to the prison for a long time may not always be a favorable solution. By my reckoning, although lengthy jail terms can also be a functional solution in some cases, rehabilitation is far more profitable in addressing these issue.
Firstly, most of the crimes committed are due to financial problems or in some countries, the colossal distinctive social class among people gradually leads to grow resentment and frustration in the people belonging to the lower class. As a result, it can make an individual never having been involved in any kind of illegal activities susceptible to break the laws or moral codes. As a matter of fact, it enables us to figure out that penalizing such criminals without rehabilitation is fairly injustice and appears merely as a temporary solution. That is to say, these ex-convicts would dramatically commit a crime again after releasing from the jail. Also the inmates can learn new and better ways to commit crimes while they are locked up with their fellow convicts. While, rehabilitation or re-educating programs train the inmates the literacy and work skills which can bring a new dimension to their lives when their punishments finished. Or they can help deal with prisoners’ psychological issues.
Secondly, in some cases such as the serial murderers, the best choice of punishment is the lengthy jail terms as they are a major threat to the society and rehabilitation cannot help them change their attitudes or essential beliefs. Some of the criminals are psychopath or have tough mental disorders difficult to be treated or controlled, so cause them not to be well responsive to re-education or rehabilitation programs.
To sum up, the rehabilitation programs are the best possible remedy for most of the criminals before reintroducing them to the society, however, imprisoning for long terms can also be taken into account as the second priority for some criminal cases.
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- Recent research shows that the consumption of junk food is a major factor in poor diet and this is detrimental to health Some people believe that better health education is the answer to this problem but others disagree What is your opinion 95
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 276, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[7]
Message: The adverb 'never' is usually put between 'having' and 'been'.
Suggestion: having never been
... As a result, it can make an individual never having been involved in any kind of illegal activit...
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Line 3, column 655, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...me again after releasing from the jail. Also the inmates can learn new and better wa...
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Line 5, column 234, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: Some
...e their attitudes or essential beliefs. Some of the criminals are psychopath or have tough ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, well, while, kind of, such as, as a matter of fact, as a result, in some cases, to sum up, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1749.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 338.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17455621302 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06005418008 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573964497041 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 555.3 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.4931791453 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.538461538 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.8461538462 7.06120827912 182% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.309076191655 0.244688304435 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0925337678859 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0854087940896 0.0667982634062 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.205873948943 0.151304729494 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0691341858873 0.056905535591 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.22 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.