Your colleague found another job and invited you to his/her farewell party. Unfortunately, you are unable to attend it. Write a letter to him/her and say
– Why can’t you attend the party?
– Why did you enjoy working with him/her?
– Offer him/her to meet some other time.
Dear Mr. Johnson,
I am very sorry to say that I will not be able to join your farewell party this Saturday.
The reason why I cannot attend your party is because my mother is now in the hospital due to a heart attack just three days ago. Although her condition is stable at the moment, the doctors advised that there should be a family member to look after her all the time.
You know, I will remember all your funny jokes that brought so much laughter to our colleagues at work. More than that, I will never forget your positive attitude and energy towards every project of the company. You have been the role model for me to follow and that is why I have always enjoyed working with you.
Despite I cannot come to your party, I still want to say goodbye to you in person before you go. If you are free next week, would you like to meet me at the local coffee shop that we usually go to after work?
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
Truong
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 43, Rule ID: REASON_IS_BECAUSE[1]
Message: Probably an incorrect phrase. Use 'the reason 'is that''.
Suggestion: is that
...e reason why I cannot attend your party is because my mother is now in the hospital due to...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, still, well, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 803.0 937.175257732 86% => OK
No of words: 185.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.34054054054 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68801715136 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.02299418646 2.54303337028 80% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 127.690721649 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.67027027027 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 243.0 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.2321486325 44.8134815571 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.3 76.5299724578 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 16.8248392259 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 4.34317383033 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.331914039914 0.216113520407 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112568061402 0.0766984524023 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0606768719202 0.0603063233224 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15268142397 0.12726935374 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0515257236684 0.0580467560999 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 8.37731958763 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 70.7449484536 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.89 8.71597938144 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.75 7.59969072165 89% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 41.2886597938 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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