Should wealthy nations be required to share their welth among poorer nations by providing such things as food and education? Or is it the responsibility of the governments of poorer nations to took after their citizens themselves?

Grammar and spelling errors:
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I think wealthy nations should required to share their wealth among poo...
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I think wealthy nations should required to share their wealth among poorer nati...
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Suggestion: But
...share their wealth among poorer nations.But their helping should only stop at provi...
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Suggestion: Therefore
...ons and poorer nations are human beings.Therefore,we cant look at,hear of,and talk about ...
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...oorer nations are human beings.Therefore,we cant look at,hear of,and talk about who...
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...r nations are human beings.Therefore,we cant look at,hear of,and talk about who lack...
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...e human beings.Therefore,we cant look at,hear of,and talk about who lack food, educat...
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...beings.Therefore,we cant look at,hear of,and talk about who lack food, education,etc...
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...,and talk about who lack food, education,etc.Without compassion and sympathy.Sharing...
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Suggestion: Without
...talk about who lack food, education,etc.Without compassion and sympathy.Sharing wealth ...
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Suggestion: Sharing
...ion,etc.Without compassion and sympathy.Sharing wealth among poorer nations is not only...
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...ly a good deal but also a task itself. Secondly,many nations in Africa an Asia ...
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...eal but also a task itself. Secondly,many nations in Africa an Asia are very poor...
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...nations in Africa an Asia are very poor.Femine, diseases,crime and illiteracy are kill...
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...a an Asia are very poor.Femine, diseases,crime and illiteracy are killing their citize...
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... killing their citizens. In the contrary,a lot of nations in Europe and America ar...
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Suggestion: If
...ions in Europe and America are too rich.If there are no actions taken,this inequal...
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...e too rich.If there are no actions taken,this inequality will increase dramatically.P...
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Suggestion: Poor
...s inequality will increase dramatically.Poor countries will become more and more poo...
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Line 5, column 298, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
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Suggestion: poorer
...lly.Poor countries will become more and more poorer while rich countries will become more a...
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...ile rich countries will become more and more richer.As a result, poorest countries will be ...
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...ntries will become more and more richer.As a result, poorest countries will be sla...
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... become more and more richer.As a result, poorest countries will be slaves of richest cou...
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Suggestion: of the richest
...esult, poorest countries will be slaves of richest countries. So, sharing wealth is usefu...
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...richest countries. So, sharing wealth is useful way to prevent people from that b...
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Suggestion: Or
... things as food, medicine and education.Or else,poor nations may depend on aid. Th...
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Suggestion: , poor
... as food, medicine and education.Or else,poor nations may depend on aid. They wont ha...
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Suggestion: Moreover
... to build their countries by themselves.Moreover,rich nations can take advantage of shar...
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...d their countries by themselves.Moreover,rich nations can take advantage of sharing w...
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...fere deeply in poor nations governments.This cant be considered humane action and sh...
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...deeply in poor nations governments.This cant be considered humane action and should ...
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...t be considered humane action and should prevented. In my opinion, sharing wea...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, look, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, third, thirdly, thus, while, i think, as a result, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1347.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 241.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.58921161826 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94007293032 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.3236229608 2.80592935109 118% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.597510373444 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 402.3 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 84.6493128905 49.4020404114 171% => OK
Chars per sentence: 149.666666667 106.682146367 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.7777777778 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 16.5555555556 7.06120827912 234% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 32.0 5.01903807615 638% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.437346160803 0.244688304435 179% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.1860829802 0.084324248473 221% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.141458370297 0.0667982634062 212% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.264977838195 0.151304729494 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.137716050698 0.056905535591 242% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.3 13.0946893788 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.44 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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