english teacher has suggested a pen friend. write a letter to introduce yourself to him
My English teacher, Mrs. Archana Yadav suggested your name for a new pen friend. To introduce myself, I’m Bhavika Soni, a second-year student pursuing a Masters in computer science from MIT, USA. I like to learn about new technologies and make good friends. I have a lot of pen friends within the campus and outside. I believe life with friends is both fun and memorable. I feel good friends are always there to guide and stand by your next in your good and bad times
Right from childhood, I was keen to write and communicate with friends through writing. Gradually, I developed a great interest in sharing thoughts with people across the globe through letters, emails, postcards, etc.
Apart from writing, I enjoy preparing food of different cuisines and experimenting with new recipes.
I’d love to listen from you and know your interest and hobbies as well.
Looking forward to an everlasting friendship!
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- You stayed at your friend’s house when you attended a conference in Australia. Unfortunately, you left a large envelope with some important documents in your room. Write a letter to your friend. In the letter:thank your friend for the staydescribe where 56
- To get a good job today it is more important for children to study mathematics and foreign languages than art and music. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? 84
- english teacher has suggested a pen friend. write a letter to introduce yourself to him 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 70, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This expression is normally spelled as one or with hyphen.
Suggestion: pen-friend; penfriend
...ana Yadav suggested your name for a new pen friend. To introduce myself, I'm Bhavika ...
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Line 1, column 323, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... friends within the campus and outside. I believe life with friends is both fun a...
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Line 1, column 378, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...with friends is both fun and memorable. I feel good friends are always there to g...
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Line 1, column 473, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... by your next in your good and bad times Right from childhood, I was keen to writ...
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Line 3, column 218, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...through letters, emails, postcards, etc. Apart from writing, I enjoy preparing fo...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...es and experimenting with new recipes. I'd love to listen from you and kno...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, second, so, well, apart from, i feel
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 32.9175257732 46% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 778.0 937.175257732 83% => OK
No of words: 155.0 206.0 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01935483871 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52844152537 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70540369578 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.696774193548 0.622605031667 112% => OK
syllable_count: 222.3 290.88556701 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.3320166719 44.8134815571 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.7272727273 76.5299724578 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0909090909 16.8248392259 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.18181818182 4.34317383033 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178900295043 0.216113520407 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0661201581181 0.0766984524023 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0740059492387 0.0603063233224 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0556964453201 0.12726935374 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.083676730517 0.0580467560999 144% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 8.37731958763 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.24 8.71597938144 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 7.59969072165 113% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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