Based on a topic given given by the tutor, I can give my vote to university based courses because you can't give your better time to the internet for the course and nobody will give the exact guidence for the research and development. In the university you can do practical analysis and you can have a healthy discussion with the professor or your tutor for the subject.
You can discuss some topics with your batch mates and you can solve the problem if you have any.
Internet based causes can give you an easy learning at your time but simantainsly you can learn atikete and proper communications to one to one & one to all.
Internet based courses may facilitate you for the pause lectures and forward if you don't like.
Concept of the internet learning is very good because one professor or one lecture copy can literate millions of people.they are more cheaper then the university based courses.they are more convinient and day by day improved lecturing.otherside university can make you a better person to live on this planet and we can make more friends also.I have studied in university of Gujarat in civil engineering and learnt a lot things to do in professional carrier and also made a good friend for the life time, they thought me positivity about life and so many other things which internet based courses can't do.
In short my view is to be a better person and to be a better professional you have to spend your time in university based courses.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, then, in short
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1223.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74031007752 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70771735557 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.503875968992 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 404.1 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 36.0 20.2975951904 177% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 167.75322011 49.4020404114 340% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 174.714285714 106.682146367 164% => OK
Words per sentence: 36.8571428571 20.7667163134 177% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.42857142857 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 17.0 5.01903807615 339% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231006671353 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115391152117 0.084324248473 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0530874942995 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122403099295 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0558540995555 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.3 13.0946893788 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.94 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.3 11.3001002004 153% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.8 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.4 10.1190380762 162% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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