The table shows the proportion of different categories of families living in poverty in Australia in 1999.
The statistical representation of table which depicted about the various type of households were stayed in destitution in Australia in the year of 1999.
The most single parent which content around 21% of people in this total counting while in couple with their children were only 12% of it. However, couple but do not have any children saw 7%, on the other hand, single was covered almost a fifth percentage in total. The least number of people illustrated in the destitute families, the old couple and single old person were given at 4% and 6% respectively. In total 11%of household communities were in the poverty, which was almost two million of people.
Overall, the largest proportion of poverty were contained by the single parents and single person than the other categories.
- The pie chart shows the main reasons what agriculture land becomes less productive. The table shows how these causes affected three region of the world during the 1990s. 73
- There are many different types of music in the world today. Why do we need music? Is the traditional music of country more important than the international music that is hard everywhere nowadays 78
- The table shows the proportion of different categories of families living in poverty in Australia in 1999. 56
- Some people think that in order to prevent illness and disease, governments should try to reduce environmental pollutions and housing problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? 84
- The diagram shows the environmental issues raised by a product over its life cycle. 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 187, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... couple but do not have any children saw 7%, on the other hand, single was covere...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 659.0 965.302439024 68% => OK
No of words: 131.0 196.424390244 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03053435115 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.38312328216 3.73543355544 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68140025883 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 83.0 106.607317073 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.63358778626 0.547539520022 116% => OK
syllable_count: 199.8 283.868780488 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 17.1537167984 43.030603864 40% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 109.833333333 112.824112599 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8333333333 22.9334400587 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.66666666667 5.23603664747 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.07147421154 0.215688989381 33% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0386032439881 0.103423049105 37% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0565756485212 0.0843802449381 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0772064879762 0.15604864568 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0584909148363 0.0819641961636 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.2329268293 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 11.4140731707 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 40.7170731707 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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