role model
Professional athletes as a role model for young people
I believe that professional athletes make good role models for young people and adults. Many of us have role models in our lives and to most people role models are athletes, movie stars, business men, supermodels, super heroes and their parents. A role model is a person who gives us inspiration, hope and keep our spirits up. Role models help us in our difficult times by their hard-working, brave, successful, inspiring personalities.
I think if we didn’t have role models in our lives it would be harder to overcome discouraging times. One of the greatest athlete role model is Lionel Andres Messi. He is a professional athlete with undying will, unbelievable scoring and unbending character. Lionel Messi, seems to be a without a weakness, making a perfect role model for youths and adults.
He is a great athlete and a great human being for young people to be inspired. Messi plays soccer hard every day. Because it is his life and he chose to become a great soccer player even he was shorter that the most successful soccer players. His height never stopped him from playing soccer. His unbending character always inspires young people encouraging them to never give up.
Everyone has that one person to look up and feel they can do anything. That person can be anyone. I think that professional athletes make good role models for young people and adults. They imbue us with their diligences even though they are not with us.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 21.0 41.998997996 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1251.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90588235294 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65073093153 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.537254901961 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 387.9 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.5495982681 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.5882352941 106.682146367 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0 20.7667163134 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.23529411765 7.06120827912 17% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.42511307672 0.244688304435 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.156345295237 0.084324248473 185% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.170299506326 0.0667982634062 255% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.297179052677 0.151304729494 196% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.195162896131 0.056905535591 343% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 13.0946893788 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.61 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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