What are the pros and cons of staying connected on social media for 24 hours a day.
Nowadays, people are connected to the social media round the clock. As such there exists both merits and demerits for 24 hours connectivity to social media. This essay will discuss both the advanatages and disadvantages of spending complete day by staying connected to this source of media.
Firstly, there exists myraid arguments in favour of time spent of social media. The most conspicuous one is that people connect themselves to social websites in order to keep themselves updated about latest happenings and maintain a close contact with their loved one's. For instance, a person travelling abroad can keep contact with his family by being connected to one of the socail apps. As a result, being connected with social media apps can bear positive results too.
On the other hand, staying connected with social media apps for a pronlonged time period does entail a few drawbacks. Not only, people waste a lot of time by being connected to these apps but they also indluge themselves in lesser social and healthy activities. For instance, an individual connected to any social app such as facebook, twitter or instagram, etc will result in having minimal social contacts followed by physical issues.
To conclude, round the clock connectivity with social media has both pros and cons. However, I opine that advantages out weigh the disadvantages as one can maintain a close contact with his loved one's.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, so, for instance, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 10.5418719212 47% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 5.94088669951 34% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 20.9802955665 62% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 31.9359605911 106% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.75862068966 35% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1184.0 1207.87684729 98% => OK
No of words: 231.0 242.827586207 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12554112554 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89854898053 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61840713431 2.71678728327 96% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 139.433497537 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.558441558442 0.580463131201 96% => OK
syllable_count: 360.9 379.143842365 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.1438644552 50.4703680194 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.6666666667 104.977214359 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.25 20.9669160288 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.75 7.25397266985 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.364311508686 0.242375264174 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.154949938195 0.0925447433944 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0962839018325 0.071462118173 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.234542138322 0.151781067708 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103779627982 0.0609392437508 170% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 12.6369458128 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 53.1260098522 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 11.5310837438 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.32886699507 103% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 55.0591133005 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.5 Out of 90
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