There are some advocates claimed that it is preferable to adopt the miserable situations. In the contrary, others believed that trying best to advance those are better than above.
First of all, it is undeniable that there are some harmful situations, which can’t be improved, such as family or childhood. If people keep complaining about the things they won’t be able to change and blaming on everyone instead of having positive attitude, his life may come up with a negative consequence. In terms of financial supports form families, some people decide to be independent and enrich their lives in various ways, whereas others argue about what they should desire and goof around all days. Therefore, sometimes accept the realities and pay attention on different aspects won’t extremely result a bad conditions of life. In other words, this act might increase the opportunities to get over the tough situations.
On the other hands, the education level or working attitude are the main methods to change the unsatisfactory job or salary. Both of them are depends on the person whether wants to improve or not. They said, the best way to advance the difficult situation is constant efforts, which means that people won’t fail permanently if they work hard. For instance, the number of celebrities has experiences poor childhood or domestic violence that doesn’t obstruct them from achievements.
In my point of view, I believe that both of the statements are useful in different situations, according to the attitude of the person. Addition to, the miserable conditions won’t maintain constantly if the person has the positive life principle.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, may, so, therefore, whereas, for instance, such as, first of all, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.15609756098 253% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 20.0 5.60731707317 357% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.97073170732 227% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1417.0 965.302439024 147% => OK
No of words: 266.0 196.424390244 135% => OK
Chars per words: 5.32706766917 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 3.73543355544 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87650984572 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 106.607317073 158% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.631578947368 0.547539520022 115% => OK
syllable_count: 439.2 283.868780488 155% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.4238688891 43.030603864 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.0 112.824112599 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4615384615 22.9334400587 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.46153846154 5.23603664747 162% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.13902439024 439% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20421525369 0.215688989381 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0683789308593 0.103423049105 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0475951707895 0.0843802449381 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120056035029 0.15604864568 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0423424883378 0.0819641961636 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.2329268293 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 61.2550243902 70% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.3012195122 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 11.4140731707 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 40.7170731707 165% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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