Space tourism: Will it bring positive or negative effects on the world's development?
Give your own opinion. Use example based on your experience.
The journey of human beings from forest survival to flying by aeroplanes represents the victory of human over universe. Presently, some proportion of people assert that discovery of other planets is fruitful for mankind in many ways. By contrast, others have conflicting views. Here, This essay will account for pros and cons of space exploration with my perception.
There are multifarious advantages of this phenomenon. First and foremost, discovering new planets can play a phenomenal role to broaden the horizon of human's knowledge. For example, human beings could find some new life sustaini...
- Some people say that TV advertisements have benefits while others believe the opposite Discuss both views give your own opinion and include examples from your experience 81
- Some people think that first impressions of an individual’s character are usually correct. Other people hesitate to judge a person on first meeting him or her, because they think first impressions can be misleading. Compare these two views. Use specific 80
- Animals are used by humans for profit in many ways. However, some people don’t agree with this use of animals. Discuss both of these views and give your own opinion. 98
- Nowadays people usually retire at the age of 60 or 65 but some want to keep working as long as they can Is this a positive or a negative development Give you own opinion and relevant examples 49
- In some countries young people move into their own homes in their early twenties. In other countries, young people stay with their parents until late thirties. Why is it happening? What are the advantages and disadvantages of both situations? 97
Comments
Sir , statement is demanding
Sir , statement is demanding to write essay using can could or will because it is saying will it bring positive or negative ?
so can we write essay by using only present indefinite rather than taking it into future by using can, could or will ?????????
There is no 'only' for essay
There is no 'only' for essay writings. Write essays according to the topics and sentences.
some proportion of people assert
some proportions of people assert
Sentence: For example, human beings could?find some new life sustaining planets for better survival of people as lifesyle on earth is under perilous threats such as global warming, terrorism, crime and natural calamities.
Error: lifesyle Suggestion: lifestyle
Sentence: Adding to it, travelling to space enables scientists to know about not only the locatations?of differents planets around earth but also aware about upcoming disasters, hurricanes, tsunamies through weather settelites in space.What is more, the contribution of space tourism to disappear unemployment is phenomenal.
Error: locatations Suggestion: No alternate word
Error: settelites Suggestion: settles
Error: differents Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: Therefore, it may cause financial instability and therefore, other important needs such as educating to illiterates, establishing roads, homes and industries for overall development might not be fulfilled due to insuffient funds.
Error: insuffient Suggestion: No alternate word
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 8.0 out of 9
Category: Excellent Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 5 2
No. of Sentences: 24 15
No. of Words: 452 350
No. of Characters: 2390 1500
No. of Different Words: 273 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.611 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.288 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.967 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 178 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 147 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 106 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 81 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 18.833 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 9.638 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.542 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.237 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.433 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.047 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5