Space tourism: Will it bring positive or negative effects on the world's development?
Give your own opinion. Use example based on your experience.
The journey of human beings from forest survival to flying by aeroplanes represents the victory of human over universe. Presently, some proportion of people assert that discovery of other planets is fruitful for mankind in many ways. By contrast, others have conflicting views. Here, This essay will account for pros and cons of space exploration with my perception.
There are multifarious advantages of this phenomenon. First and foremost, discovering new planets can play a phenomenal role to broaden the horizon of human's knowledge. For example, human beings could find some new life sustaini...
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Comments
Sir , statement is demanding
Sir , statement is demanding to write essay using can could or will because it is saying will it bring positive or negative ?
so can we write essay by using only present indefinite rather than taking it into future by using can, could or will ?????????
There is no 'only' for essay
There is no 'only' for essay writings. Write essays according to the topics and sentences.
some proportion of people assert
some proportions of people assert
Sentence: For example, human beings could?find some new life sustaining planets for better survival of people as lifesyle on earth is under perilous threats such as global warming, terrorism, crime and natural calamities.
Error: lifesyle Suggestion: lifestyle
Sentence: Adding to it, travelling to space enables scientists to know about not only the locatations?of differents planets around earth but also aware about upcoming disasters, hurricanes, tsunamies through weather settelites in space.What is more, the contribution of space tourism to disappear unemployment is phenomenal.
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Error: settelites Suggestion: settles
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Sentence: Therefore, it may cause financial instability and therefore, other important needs such as educating to illiterates, establishing roads, homes and industries for overall development might not be fulfilled due to insuffient funds.
Error: insuffient Suggestion: No alternate word
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Score: 8.0 out of 9
Category: Excellent Excellent
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Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
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