Some people think that poverty is the reason behind most crimes. Do you agree or disagree
Some people consider it that the main causes of increasing criminal activities is because of impoverished people in the society. In my opinion, I disagree with that poor person attempt to break the law, also this essay provide some reason for the crime is lack of education and family inattention.
To begin with, The crime rate is rising due to the young adult and not concentrate on the studies during the college time. In that time, They always not attend the classes properly and off and take the break from the studies so that, When the examination has taken place unfortunately students fail in the test. For example, in the United States newspaper showed that most criminals in the city take part in criminal activity because these people not passed the territory education. For these reason, people do not have college degree is performing more crimes in the area not the poor people.
Another reason for the minor crimes namely, robbery chain snatching are increased result of parents are not strict whenever, their child perform any activity which detrimental to people. And therefore, it is a duty of guardians that they take care the children otherwise, in later life young person try to do offend. In the other words, Many scientists prove their people and more think about the crimes if they are not surrounded by family or improper child care. Due to this reason, rate of offenders are increase it as their family member not check their child activity.
In conclusion, in my view, Crimes are climate to high-level is not by poor people of poverty but due to lack of knowledge in higher secondary and also family give less importance to children while they growing up
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, second, so, therefore, while, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion, in my view, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1403.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87152777778 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46550028339 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.555555555556 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 451.8 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 33.7112189188 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.545454545 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1818181818 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2727272727 7.06120827912 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167786967816 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0627613571507 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0447552510472 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100500842409 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0409445489564 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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