Write a letter to the airline company. In your letter
• Introduce yourself.
• Complain about the delay
• Explain the problems that is caused you
• Ask for a letter of apology and/or some form of compensation.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter with regard to an unexpected delay in my return flight that occurred last night. my flight number was 2EE3456 from Australia Back to England which had delayed for 24 hours, therefore, I had to stayed there an extra day more, I just been there for a work session. As I supposed to commence my work in following day, unfortunately this delay brought me nothing but an inconvenience situation, not a mere for me, also for my employer who excepted my reports about this journey be on his desk.
Hence you are quite aware, the consequences of this matter is on your airline company, and actually I am wondering to enquiry for a compensation. As I read your brochure carefully, it indicates the recompense would be a full payment of return flight price.I can be contacted at the address supplied. A swift response would be greatly appreciated.
Your faithfully,
Chi Chung
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this letter with regard to ...
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... about this journey be on his desk. Hence you are quite aware, the consequences o...
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...e carefully, it indicates the recompense would be a full payment of return flight...
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...e a full payment of return flight price.I can be contacted at the address supplie...
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...response would be greatly appreciated. Your faithfully, Chi Chung
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, hence, if, so, therefore, i suppose, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 15.0 26.3917525773 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 767.0 937.175257732 82% => OK
No of words: 159.0 206.0 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82389937107 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55098862472 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83807426949 2.54303337028 112% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.710691823899 0.622605031667 114% => OK
syllable_count: 231.3 290.88556701 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 65.4017412238 44.8134815571 146% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.571428571 76.5299724578 143% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7142857143 16.8248392259 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2857142857 4.34317383033 237% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.29896907216 47% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164045908534 0.216113520407 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0697387140057 0.0766984524023 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0551341903332 0.0603063233224 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111541219793 0.12726935374 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00774680293321 0.0580467560999 13% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 8.37731958763 150% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 70.7449484536 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 8.71597938144 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.