Government officials should rely on their own judgment rather than unquestioningly carry out the will of the people they serve.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position.
The government officials that are in the place to take serious decisions are the ones that are elected by the people because people judged them and deemed that they are equipped enough to take good decisions. An official thereby should not hesitate and should rely on their own judgment.
The official who is at the place where he/she is now symbolizes that he/she must have had to take a series of amazing decisions to rise it to the top. this means they are more likely to have good experience at making good judgements, which is very important since a naïve official who has had less experience is more likely to make wrong judgement which would jeopardize the well-being of the people they serve and not only they have good experience, they are educated enough to take good decisions and foresee the outcomes of the decisions that they take.
They might be more aware of the consequences of a judgement the masses. it might seem for the masses that its officials are spending money on things like defense or space programs which don't reap any immediate benefit and might not even understand the long term benefits of this spending as they have less awareness of the situation that drove the officials to spend more money into a perticular field. if the official had taken decision based on the people’s opinion it could be fatal as they may lack required defenses at times of war
They are representing the diverse ethnicities and thereby they would be able to judge what is better for all those communities as a group. Let’s assume a river flowing cross 2 different states and both the states are of desperate need of water and if the decision of the official is based on majority there would be a great amount of damage for the minority. Such decisions made by the official require his novel approaches for both the wellbeing of the two sides of the issue and standing by one side is of no good for the people as a group.
Downside is if the person who takes judgement turns narcissistic in a bad way, things can take a bad turn as it would start to look like autocracy. there is a chance that they might not even bother the needs of the people and just simple suppose that their judgments are good for people while is serves his personal benefits.
There is a high chance of success if the officials are capacitated to take judgments on their own rather than taking opinion from the people.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
...mazing decisions to rise it to the top. this means they are more likely to have good...
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Suggestion: It
...consequences of a judgement the masses. it might seem for the masses that its offi...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...gs like defense or space programs which dont reap any immediate benefit and might no...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: If
...end more money into a perticular field. if the official had taken decision based o...
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Line 9, column 66, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a bad way" with adverb for "bad"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
... who takes judgement turns narcissistic in a bad way, things can take a bad turn as it would...
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Suggestion: There
... it would start to look like autocracy. there is a chance that they might not even bo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, may, so, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 19.5258426966 138% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.4196629213 121% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.3162921348 141% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 33.0505617978 118% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 58.6224719101 80% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1995.0 2235.4752809 89% => OK
No of words: 429.0 442.535393258 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.65034965035 5.05705443957 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55107846309 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46685913977 2.79657885939 88% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 215.323595506 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.473193473193 0.4932671777 96% => OK
syllable_count: 639.9 704.065955056 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.38483146067 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.2370786517 59% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 35.0 23.0359550562 152% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 94.6515172737 60.3974514979 157% => OK
Chars per sentence: 166.25 118.986275619 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 35.75 23.4991977007 152% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.5 5.21951772744 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170392330815 0.243740707755 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0760164730191 0.0831039109588 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0620733181471 0.0758088955206 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106434159764 0.150359130593 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0527796879107 0.0667264976115 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.3 14.1392134831 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.41 48.8420337079 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 12.1743820225 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.28 12.1639044944 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.38706741573 97% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 100.480337079 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.8971910112 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.0 11.2143820225 143% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 11.7820224719 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.