Some museums and art galleries charge admission fees, while others have free entry.
Do you think the advantages of charging for admission outweigh the disadvantages?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Visiting museums and art galleries are one of the most interesting things to learn something. Of course, conservation of art collections and finds have lots of costs, and some places put a ticket to visiting the museum.
I strongly believe that paid to see art galleries or museums is something necessary to maintain them. They have lots of costs: for the guides, for the conservation, for the restoration, for lights and for cleaning the spaces. If there is not a ticket, maybe this beautiful painting or scientific material could not be maintained and they coul be ruined.
On the other hand, the problem is that sometimes tickets are very expensive, so some families could not spend that money and there is the risk that museum will become a place only for rich persons. Lots of people think that a solution could be have free entry and tell to visitors to left a free offer, based on what they could afford. For example, it is like that in science museum in Bergamo. Even though it could be a brilliant idea, you have to trust that people give to the gallery something, and unfortunately if they are not oblige, they could give nothing. Therefore, it is for these reason that there is the needed to have a ticket.
To sum up, I think that a good solution to this problem could be have a different ticket for students, families, over 60 and so on. If everyone paid a little, art, history and science could be more accessible to everyone.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 533, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'obliged'.
Suggestion: obliged
...hing, and unfortunately if they are not oblige, they could give nothing. Therefore, it...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, so, therefore, for example, i think, of course, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1193.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.6420233463 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56428204384 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.525291828794 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 367.2 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.235362523 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.4166666667 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4166666667 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.08333333333 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20747963289 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0861241837723 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0458979601773 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129929315038 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0401921725182 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 50.2224549098 134% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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