Without capital punishment (the penalty) our lives are less secure and crimes of violence increase. Capital punishment is essential to control violence. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this opinion.
Nowadays, Survey depicts that human lives are not as save as should be meanwhile violence of crime are being enhanced. My inclination supports the statement that capital punishment is more important and right way to stop violence that actually will create peacefulness among the country.
To commence with, I would like to outline the few advantages of implement capital punishment procedure among the country that actually will be helpful to stop number of crimes for instance, street crime, robbery, snatching and many others. Furthermore, number of pedagogical experts believes that capital punishment is also a straight message for the criminal which makes them scared before doing any crime. Along with this, for the depletion of crime government needs to spread the awareness nationwide especially for youngsters as well as illiterate people that ultimately will be worthwhile.
Moreover, commonly it has seen in several countries wherein crime ratio is less as compare to others namely; Saudi Arabia, Dubai, United States of America and so on. Although, many a time I have seen in 3rd world countries where crime ration is being increased with the passage of time on account of several reasons for example, poverty, loopholes in policy, inadequacy of money and etc which increases violence among the country.
To sum up, in order to curb the tendency of society government should implement the sanctions as well as take necessary actions for the sake of country against any crime. Last and Foremost requirement, for tackling this worrying trend government need to provide basic education to the nation indeed it will be better for the prosperity of the country.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: than
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...for the prosperity of the country.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, furthermore, moreover, so, well, while, for example, for instance, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1426.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34082397004 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69182364151 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.610486891386 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 443.7 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 40.6924629779 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 158.444444444 106.682146367 149% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.6666666667 20.7667163134 143% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.5555555556 7.06120827912 164% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173666472751 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.076389153057 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0465704551568 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104362948013 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0613414499083 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.6 13.0946893788 142% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.58 50.2224549098 67% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.28 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.45 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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