You have recently moved to a different house. Write a letter to a friend. In your letter1) explain why you have moved.2) describe the new house.3) Invite your friend to come and visit.
<p class="p1"><span class="s1">Dear Molly, </span></p><p class="p2"><span style="font-size: 1.1em;">I've some news to tell you. Remember I told you about the Albany region that I used to live is quite dirty, poor and there are lots of homeless people moving around. My parents got sick of it and they were checking for new houses about a couple of months until they found a perfect one.</span><span class="Apple-converted-space" style="font-size: 1.1em;"> </span><br><span class="s1"></span></p><p class="p2"><span style="font-size: 1.1em;">The house is renewed, more spacious with open kitchen and huge living room. We moved in just a week ago and the area looks really safe and interesting. Here are some nice parks, beaches, and waterfalls nearby. Also, the neighborhood seems friendly, one neighbor even invited us for a coffee. So it is a much better place than we used to live.</span><span class="Apple-converted-space" style="font-size: 1.1em;"> </span><br><span class="s1"></span></p><p class="p2"><span style="font-size: 1.1em;">By now we have settled in and I'm more than happy to invite you as my first friend to come and visit us in Melbourne, 23 Greenhithe street. You don't need to take anything, I'll prepare some snacks and we can watch a movie or have a nice walk later, depends on the weather. Let me know when you would like to come. </span><br><span class="s1"></span></p>
<p class="p2"><span style="font-size: 1.1em;">See you soon, </span><br><span class="s1"></span></p><p class="p2"><span style="font-size: 1.1em;">Monica</span><br><span class="s1"></span></p>
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 62, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: ,  
...s;>Dear Molly,
Line 1, column 146, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I've
...pan style='font-size: 1.1em;'>Ive some news to tell you. Remember I told ...
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Line 1, column 1223, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...em;'>By now we have settled in and Im more than happy to invite you as my fir...
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Line 1, column 1336, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...in Melbourne, 23 Greenhithe street. You dont need to take anything, Ill prepare some...
^^^^
Line 1, column 1364, Rule ID: ILL_I_LL[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I'll'?
Suggestion: I'll
...street. You dont need to take anything, Ill prepare some snacks and we can watch a ...
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Line 1, column 1368, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (Ill) must be used with a third-person verb: 'prepares'.
Suggestion: prepares
...et. You dont need to take anything, Ill prepare some snacks and we can watch a movie or...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 79, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: ,  
...pos;font-size: 1.1em;'>See you soon,
<...> ^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, look, really, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1622.0 937.175257732 173% => OK
No of words: 211.0 206.0 102% => OK
Chars per words: 7.68720379147 4.54256449028 169% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 8.6963428269 2.54303337028 342% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 144.0 127.690721649 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.682464454976 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 407.7 290.88556701 140% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.41237113402 135% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.13402061856 33% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 16.3608247423 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 135.93062864 44.8134815571 303% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 180.222222222 76.5299724578 235% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 23.4444444444 16.8248392259 139% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.22222222222 4.34317383033 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.29896907216 47% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0462584323081 0.216113520407 21% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.035784497247 0.0766984524023 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0284707659733 0.0603063233224 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0348554090057 0.12726935374 27% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0236842950342 0.0580467560999 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 26.5 8.37731958763 316% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 22.75 70.7449484536 32% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 3.82989690722 339% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 7.45979381443 212% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 27.62 8.71597938144 317% => Coleman_liau_index is high.
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 8.62886597938 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 8.54432989691 131% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 8.15463917526 159% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.