Technology has become a very integral part of our day to day Life. It has made our life easy and comfortable in various ways due to its availability , accessibility and ability to perform multiple tasks and consuming less time. We are very much dependant on it and now it has become impossible to imagine life without technology.
There is no Individual these days without a smart phone these day's. Even School students are using smart phone as it is useful for them to get access to study materials and carry vast information in a small space rather than carrying heavy books. However, many students do not realize that how they are being monitored and their personal database in their phone are not safe anymore. The gallery or any document in their phone are accessible to the site of the website they use when purchasing things online, or any booking online. We need to provide current location details for using online can facility and hence always turn on the Location tracker in device like GPS.
There are prons and cons to everything. A person with good technological knowledge can use the facilities appropriately as there are also options available in the same to safeguard the privacy and security of people hence enabling the user to choose the information.or data they want to keep with them or publish in public.
- Scientists believe that in order to protect the environment people must use less energy in their daily lives However most people have not changed the way they live Why do you think many people have not taken individual action What could be done to encoura 73
- Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations.Discuss both these views and give your opinion. 11
- Some people believe that children's leisure activities must be educational,otherwise they are a complete waste of time.Do you agree or disagree?Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your experience. 82
- Medical technology helps to live long life. Is that curse or blessing for society and mankind? 55
- Some people prefer activities and lifestyle in hot climates while others prefer activities and lifestyle in cold climate. Discuss both views and give your opinion. 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d comfortable in various ways due to its availability , accessibility and ability...
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Suggestion: ,
...in various ways due to its availability , accessibility and ability to perform mu...
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Message: Did you mean 'dependent' on?
Suggestion: dependent
...d consuming less time. We are very much dependant on it and now it has become impossible ...
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Suggestion:
...no Individual these days without a smart phone these days. Even School students a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, however, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1115.0 1615.20841683 69% => OK
No of words: 228.0 315.596192385 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89035087719 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64652599563 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.640350877193 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 375.3 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.4150585334 49.4020404114 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.5 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.8 7.06120827912 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.120127218859 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0371705829567 0.084324248473 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0479675991214 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0653533267768 0.151304729494 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0404905250433 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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