in some countries, people who have high incomes pay very high taxes. what are the advantages and disadvantages of this for individuals and for the country?
It is often asserted that people who adequately trained have significant success in teaching and socialize students compared to their parents.Teachers’ function is essential to expedite student’s improvement. I would say that I completely agree with the education of children in schools with standard facilities and qualified experts.
Although it is undeniable that parents play a prominent role in the up growing their offspring, pedagogy at home are detrimental to their future career. First of all, fathers and mothers didn't have suitably educated and so not experienced to transform general knowledge to their kids. It is too important to educate students accurately. Additionally, in educational systems, not only remarkably diverse the textbooks for different ages but also most of their officials constantly update their approaches with advanced methods. For these reasons, to bring up to date instructor might be able to exchange new knowledge effectively. Facilitated educational institutions will make students more empowered and creative. For example, various laboratories, as well as well-equipped sports clubs, prepare them for national and international competitions.
Concerning the social aspect, most of the schools in the subject of socialization of learners are manageable . In other words, pupils interact with their peers and familiarize themselves with social behaviors outdoors. If they are more take part in group activities so the more productive and easily communicate with other they seem. Therefore, studying academically cultivates healthy relationships and a strong sense of community.
In conclusion, despite the equivalently critical of both parents and teachers' parts in the teenager's logical progression, I reckon that teacher’s role is crucial to student’s intellectual and social growth.
- Excessive consumption of sugar causes many health related issues. Some people believe the government should control population's sugar intake while others think people themselves should be responsible for their sugar eating habits.Discuss both views and 11
- in some countries, people who have high incomes pay very high taxes. what are the advantages and disadvantages of this for individuals and for the country? 11
- School teachers are more responsible for social and intellectual development of students than parents to what extent do you agree or disagree? 89
- Many people believe that the increasing number of cars in cities is the biggest source of pollution and waste. Others think that industries are the ones causing pollution. Discuss both views and give your opinion. 61
- Excessive consumption of sugar causes many health related issues. Some people believe the government should control population's sugar intake while others think people themselves should be responsible for their sugar eating habits.Discuss both views and 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Teachers&apos
...lize students compared to their parents.Teachers' function is essential to expedite stud...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...reer. First of all, fathers and mothers didnt have suitably educated and so not exper...
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...socialization of learners are manageable . In other words, pupils interact with th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, therefore, well, for example, i reckon, in conclusion, as well as, first of all, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1593.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.98872180451 5.12529762239 117% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.44690582787 2.80592935109 123% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.665413533835 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 492.3 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.6578951912 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.785714286 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.64285714286 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0706663778021 0.244688304435 29% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0217205162067 0.084324248473 26% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.033066135007 0.0667982634062 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0338279254627 0.151304729494 22% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.036007259165 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 26.81 50.2224549098 53% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.46 12.4159519038 141% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.63 8.58950901804 124% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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