Internet shopping
Given are two figures concerning of internet use in five European countries were Switzerland, Germany,
France, Spain and UK in 1995, 2000 and 2004, while on the second data indicates the popularity of
internet shopping in three countries were France, Switzerland and Germany.
It is apparent from the information supplied that UK had the highest number of internet users in 1995
and 2004.
It start from 16 millions then climbed steadily to 22 million in 2000.It was dramatically rise to 41 million
in 2004.
In particular, Germany saw threefold increases during the period. It had the highest users were 314
million in 2000, then plunged to 15 million in 2004. France get a climbed up from 1995 to 2004.
Furthermore, the two nations with the fewest internet users were Switzerland and Spain.
In the diagram provided that France is the most popular in internet shopping. Germany and Switzerland,
meanwhile, had moderate necessity of online shopping.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Internet
...cond data indicates the popularity of internet shopping in three countries were France...
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: And
...hest number of internet users in 1995 and 2004. It start from 16 millions then ...
^^^
Line 11, column 71, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: It
... climbed steadily to 22 million in 2000.It was dramatically rise to 41 million i...
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Line 11, column 91, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'risen'.
Suggestion: risen
... 22 million in 2000.It was dramatically rise to 41 million in 2004. In particula...
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Line 13, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: In
...t was dramatically rise to 41 million in 2004. In particular, Germany saw thre...
^^
Line 17, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Million
...od. It had the highest users were 314 million in 2000, then plunged to 15 million in ...
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Line 17, column 1, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a million'.
Suggestion: a million
...od. It had the highest users were 314 million in 2000, then plunged to 15 million in ...
^^^^^^^
Line 17, column 61, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'gets'.
Suggestion: gets
...n plunged to 15 million in 2004. France get a climbed up from 1995 to 2004. Furth...
^^^
Line 17, column 61, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (France) must be used with a third-person verb: 'gets'.
Suggestion: gets
...n plunged to 15 million in 2004. France get a climbed up from 1995 to 2004. Furth...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, second, then, while, in particular
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 825.0 965.302439024 85% => OK
No of words: 155.0 196.424390244 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32258064516 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52844152537 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77213727244 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 89.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.574193548387 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 228.6 283.868780488 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 65.0847500676 43.030603864 151% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.6666666667 112.824112599 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2222222222 22.9334400587 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.22222222222 5.23603664747 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 10.0 3.83414634146 261% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 1.69756097561 530% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195604858132 0.215688989381 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0726866934428 0.103423049105 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0865980295547 0.0843802449381 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0904056324259 0.15604864568 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.114688728354 0.0819641961636 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.2329268293 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 61.2550243902 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.28 11.4140731707 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.