The charts below give information on UK spending habits for books bought over the internet .
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make a comparison where relevant.
The line chart provides data on expenditure of bought books over the internet from 1997 to 2002 in UK. While, the pie chart depicts information about money spent for purchasing books by four English states, named Northern Ireland, England, Wales and Scotland. Overall, it can be seen that, habits for online books buying have increased over the period. In addition, the highest books purchased was in England.
To begin, regarding online expenditure on books in 1997, stood at just over ten million. After a year, it experienced an increase of five million approximately. For the next three years, much more money have been spent, 19, 22, 24 million respectively. In 2002, it was the highest rise, accounted to about 25 million.
Regarding the regions of books sales, England was the most interesting in books, for about four-fifths of the total books sales. However, Northern Ireland had a dramatic fall in books purchasing for 1%. Additionally, in Wales, online books bought was one-tenth, while Scotland has accounted to 8%.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, regarding, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 6.8 15% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 866.0 965.302439024 90% => OK
No of words: 168.0 196.424390244 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15476190476 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60020574368 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70148925922 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 106.607317073 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.64880952381 0.547539520022 118% => OK
syllable_count: 247.5 283.868780488 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.6243993241 43.030603864 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.7272727273 112.824112599 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2727272727 22.9334400587 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.81818181818 5.23603664747 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195301125335 0.215688989381 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0743078034903 0.103423049105 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0589620916521 0.0843802449381 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135152984014 0.15604864568 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0851006074432 0.0819641961636 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.2329268293 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.3012195122 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.0 11.4140731707 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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