A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.
Undoubtedly, education plays the most fundamental role in every society's development. In order for an educational system to operate well, some people claim that all schools should teach the same national curriculum to students, while others opine that study plans should be designed according to the needs of each school and its pupils. In my opinion the same national curriculum can ensure better organaization and fair assessment of students, therefore is more advantageous.
Proposing a unique study plan to schools can prevent any disorder and disagreement among states, schools and teachers.National study plans are often designed by professional tutors and are thus more standards than individual teacher's curriculum. Additionaly, through same courses, national or state exams are more reliable, since they assess the same material taught to all students in a country. On the other hand, when the autonomy is given to schools for designing a study plan, the chance of provoking havoc and disagreement among different professionals is high.In this situation the time and talent of many students is wasted instead of being nurtured.
Having said that, providing study plans by individuals can have several merits. Teachers are familiar with the weakness and strength of their pupils, therefore they can be informed enough about providing a study plan which brings the best in their student. Teachers can idendify the genius in their classes and help to nurture those students talents by giving him or her a specific study course. This can bring numerous benefits for teachers, students and country as a whole.Additionaly, individual study plans can preclude boredom in classes, teachers can motivate students through numerous techniques and strategies when they are give the authority to control the class, while a national curriculum may thwart their ability to incite student's creativity and motives.
In summary, although offering the autonomy of designing the curriculum to teachers or schools can have some potential advantages, I believe that a national study plan can ensure justice in examinations and betters organizations of schools and classes.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, so, therefore, thus, well, while, in summary, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.5258426966 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 14.8657303371 114% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 33.0505617978 57% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 58.6224719101 67% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1846.0 2235.4752809 83% => OK
No of words: 332.0 442.535393258 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.56024096386 5.05705443957 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.55969084622 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95294267564 2.79657885939 106% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 215.323595506 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.557228915663 0.4932671777 113% => OK
syllable_count: 567.9 704.065955056 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.2370786517 54% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 23.0359550562 130% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 84.5814195254 60.3974514979 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 167.818181818 118.986275619 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.1818181818 23.4991977007 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.90909090909 5.21951772744 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272730259213 0.243740707755 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111822535696 0.0831039109588 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0794939874386 0.0758088955206 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175898857092 0.150359130593 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0533969172855 0.0667264976115 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.8 14.1392134831 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.57 48.8420337079 67% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 12.1743820225 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.56 12.1639044944 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.64 8.38706741573 115% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 100.480337079 95% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 11.8971910112 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 11.2143820225 125% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 11.7820224719 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.