Nowadays, society relies on technology for their daily necessities and therefore parents permit their kids to play on gadgets and learn new technical skills.I am of the opinion that, the pros of influence of technology on kids outweigh the cons.
It is unimaginable to live without technology as it has become an indispensable part of our daily lives and therefore, it's quite natural that parents think their children will benefit from interacting with new gadgets.Firstly, playing video games enable children cognitive ability, decision making skills and accomplishing task oriented goals.For instance, future surgeons are advised to play console games to achieve more precision and dexterity during laparoscopic surgeries.Secondly, it avoids them the struggle of handling modern gadgets as compared to their parents and grandparents, who struggle to even make a simple phone call. Being updated with technology therefore has its merits in the long run.
Although, various merits of technology are to be appreciated, it also comes along with it shares of demerits.To start with, the internet although a platform in which children can learn a lot about various subjects and interact with their friends, may also lead to their downfall.To elaborate, interaction through social media with friends is accepted, sometimes spending excess time on these sites may also lead to speaking with strangers without the parents knowledge.This can become a threat to the kids lives as the stranger can be a child-molester or murderer.Furthermore, being addictive to these devices make them more introvert , due to lack of outdoor games and face to face interaction with friends.
In conclusion, it is inevitable for us to escape the grip of technology in our lives today.Therefore the advantage of parents of allowing their children to be involved in technological devices certainly outweighs its disadvantages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, for instance, in conclusion, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1616.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.53424657534 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.28869299823 2.80592935109 117% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578767123288 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 498.6 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 58.0 20.2975951904 286% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 248.393236623 49.4020404114 503% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 323.2 106.682146367 303% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 58.4 20.7667163134 281% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 23.0 7.06120827912 326% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249917033068 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.144470231935 0.084324248473 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0763255355175 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171617195857 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0590709127513 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 33.8 13.0946893788 258% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 4.15 50.2224549098 8% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.44779559118 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 27.1 11.3001002004 240% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.68 12.4159519038 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.11 8.58950901804 129% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 30.5 9.78957915832 312% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 25.2 10.1190380762 249% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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