Volunteering to help the public is a quality to be admired upon.Some people suggest that young adolescents are needed to do free work in their spare time to help the neighborhood, believing that it would benefit both the teenagers and society. I totally disagree to this notion due to various reasons which i will enlist in this essay.
The concept of making young students to do unpaid work in their free time is quite preposterous. First of all, these teenagers are forced to do work, and will hate their local community for it. This unwillful volunteering will lead to a disastrous outcome to both the individual and the society as a whole.If they are paid for their works like cleaning the roads,and planting trees, they would cherish those memories and may eventually be encouraged to further do services to the public in the future.Furthermore, the elderly people in the community are to be held more responsible in shaping the neighborhood. The volunteer works by school teenagers will make them more lazy, irresponsible, and hesitant to be involved in bringing up the locality.For instance, a village in Romania was initially being taken care by service of young individuals, but as time passed by the village became distraught and this occured due to lack of involvement of elderly people.
On top of that, since most teenagers attend school, the idea of free time is quite impossible.Students have to bear the meticulous time-table at school, and need to concentrate on their studies more, thus making it more difficult for students if they involve in volunteer works.For instance, the strenuous volunteer works by tenth grade students in Tamilnadu has severly affected their board results.Finally, it is better for teenagers to volunteer if they are paid for it and they should be encouraged to do so without hindering their studies.This in turn may reciprocate well, when these children hold great position and power in future by helping their neighborhood politically and financially.
In conclusion, eventhough the concept of volunteering young teenagers to develop the local comminity is appreciative.It should not be done at the expense of their time and education.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, furthermore, if, may, so, thus, well, for instance, in conclusion, first of all, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1836.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 355.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17183098592 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34067318298 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14541321306 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.521126760563 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 568.8 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 44.0 20.2975951904 217% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 197.467718881 49.4020404114 400% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 229.5 106.682146367 215% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 44.375 20.7667163134 214% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 14.5 7.06120827912 205% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.39636694004 0.244688304435 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.190268932235 0.084324248473 226% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0798021971543 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.252343795523 0.151304729494 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0786170190432 0.056905535591 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 25.1 13.0946893788 192% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 26.82 50.2224549098 53% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.5 11.3001002004 181% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.59 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.82 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 19.6 10.1190380762 194% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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