Many sports player advertise sports related products .what are some of the advantages and disadvantages of this changing trend.
In this commercialism era , numerous sports personalities has promote to sports equipment .This newest change provide strengthen to sale of sport items and it has a wonderful impact on youth .Both the views related to above given statement will be discussed in the upcoming paragraphs with my perspective.
To begin with , commercial ads of games relevant products like sports shoes , cricket bat , badminton racquet generate sports game playing enthusiasm under masses. To illustrate, today's generation is more interested in sports and accept it professionally . Another pros is , sale of gaming products escalated consequently people are approach to purchase these goods not only for play games but also for maintain sporty look.
On the flip side , advertising sports celebrities get huge chunk of money for that work . sometimes , for money they promote those products which are not of better quality results people badly effect with it. Secondly , increases demand of sports things leads price goes up .youth enroll by commercial and waste their money on buying it. To exemplify , youngsters not prefers to bought cricket bat from domestic market they approach specifically for advertised bat , whether it's under budget or not.
To recapitulate , promoting gaming items beneficial for the growth of sports market and for games but it has also some drawbacks example high price and players greed for money . But overall results of advertisement profitable and it's merits outweigh to it's demerits.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, if, look, second, secondly, so, then, thus, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1270.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 232.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.47413793103 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90276135726 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85420280636 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.663793103448 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 378.9 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.4759302492 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.0 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.2 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 24.0 5.01903807615 478% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239283301369 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0916604460307 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0653922902793 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149254176176 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.054920876021 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.74 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.34 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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