Some say that the most important thing about being rich is that one has the opportunity to help others. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
God helps those who helps others. Most of us believes that wealthy people have a responsibility to assist others. I agree with the opinion and they must work for unprivileged section of the society by providing them education and creating more job opportunities.
To begin with, many people with deep pockets are diverting their funds on providing education to poor people. These individuals are working closely with government to make sure quality education is provided to children who cannot afford it. They, also, visit remote villages to understand the reason which hinders a child to get education and they do their best to solve these problems. For instance, WIPRO’s CEO Azim Premji donated 12,000 crores and created a trust which ensures quality education is provided in remote locations of India. After analysing, they found that rural children grasp education in a different manner because of which they worked with government in order to create a tailored curriculum.
On the other hand, providing education alone will not help to bring poor out of miserable life and we must create more jobs in countries like India so that everyone can get 2 squares of meal. Without employment people will not be able to earn their livelihood which means they will not send their kids to school to get education. We must make sure they are getting regular employment options that will enable them to send their young generation to educational institutions and enhance their skillset. A survey by an NGO highlighted that TATA Trust is working closely with government in creating new job opportunity and also giving them skilled training to earn their bread and butter.
To conclude, big industrialist must divert some funds from their profits to uplift weaker section as a payback of the society. They must utilize these funds towards the reasons that restrain poor people from sending their children to school.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider replacing "in a different manner" with adverb for "different"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, for instance, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1617.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1661341853 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6281407272 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571884984026 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 489.6 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.0550277813 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.5 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3571428571 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.64285714286 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.057845379352 0.244688304435 24% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0290368777616 0.084324248473 34% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0420145287778 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0490991563297 0.151304729494 32% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0508243635722 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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