It is believed that universities should enroll men and women in equal numbers. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In the past, man was the protector and decision maker in the home. Women were limited to domestic matters such as looking after the home and raising children. Further, they had lower literacy level due to limited education and limited freedom. Moreover they did not travel independently whilst they haven't freedom to make their own decisions. It was the purely a male dominated era. On the other hand women in the past were not affected by globalization and cultural influence.
Dramatically, in this rapidly evolving era with the advancement of education, knowledge, business, communication, science and technology standards of rapidly increased and continue to change. Moreover, Children by both men and women having same educational leading to equal employment opportunities. However society's outlook towards women has now changed. Presently, women have reached equal and greater hights than men specially, in the developing and developed countries whilst they are able to make their own decisions without male pressure. Women in massive countries now have even entered in to dangerous professions.
In conclusion, I strongly agree with this statement because global conflics and economic pressure are affecting every home. In the future as more and more women venture in to higher education and demanding careers. Thus changing the entire family structure in these process.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Moreover,
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Suggestion: However,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, look, moreover, so, thus, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 6.8 176% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 5.60731707317 196% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.97073170732 227% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1173.0 965.302439024 122% => OK
No of words: 212.0 196.424390244 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.53301886792 4.92477711251 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86239536521 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 106.607317073 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.660377358491 0.547539520022 121% => OK
syllable_count: 376.2 283.868780488 133% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.45097560976 124% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 8.94146341463 157% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.1681571985 43.030603864 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.7857142857 112.824112599 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1428571429 22.9334400587 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.42857142857 5.23603664747 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.110717090853 0.215688989381 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0351287581792 0.103423049105 34% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0382368612747 0.0843802449381 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0680678394595 0.15604864568 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0393586218652 0.0819641961636 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.2329268293 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 39.33 61.2550243902 64% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.2 11.4140731707 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.19 8.06136585366 126% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 40.7170731707 192% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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