You recently received a letter from a friend asking for advice about whether to go to college or to try to get a job. You think he / she should get a job.
Write a letter to this friend. In your letter
- Say why he / she would not enjoy going to college
- Explain why getting a job is a good idea for him / her
- Suggest types of jobs that would be suitable for him / her
Dear Parisa,
I hope this letter deserves you well. As I detect in your mail whether go to college or not, It seems you get in a complicated dilemma . Actually if you quietly ask my advice about this issue, honestly, I suggest you to find a job and commence your occupant time. In my opinion college is not suitable for your characteristic traits. Since your fancy always is to be an expert chef, and I'm entirely sure about your tasty in foods and ingredients, I have always imagined you as a top chef who will promote to the highest step in cooking. besides that I have mentioned your seven-year experiences in Laviza Italian restaurant.
Furthermore, I'm support that idea about Cheflion cooking school.It sound fascinating to go there and while you are learning new methods, you can take a job as a cooker . I hope I could help you in this matter. Let me know whether you decides to take a job or not.
Best Wishes,
Chi Chung
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Parisa, I hope this letter deserves you well. As...
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Line 3, column 137, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...t seems you get in a complicated dilemma . Actually if you quietly ask my advice a...
^^
Line 3, column 354, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[4]
Message: The adverb 'always' is usually put after the verb 'is'.
Suggestion: is always
...characteristic traits. Since your fancy always is to be an expert chef, and Im entirely s...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 390, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...ncy always is to be an expert chef, and Im entirely sure about your tasty in foods...
^^
Line 3, column 540, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Besides
...promote to the highest step in cooking. besides that I have mentioned your seven-year e...
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Line 5, column 14, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...iza Italian restaurant. Furthermore, Im support that idea about Cheflion cookin...
^^
Line 5, column 65, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: It
...that idea about Cheflion cooking school.It sound fascinating to go there and while...
^^
Line 5, column 68, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'sounds'?
Suggestion: sounds
...t idea about Cheflion cooking school.It sound fascinating to go there and while you a...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 168, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... methods, you can take a job as a cooker . I hope I could help you in this matter....
^^
Line 5, column 235, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[4]
Message: The pronoun 'you' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'decide'
Suggestion: decide
...in this matter. Let me know whether you decides to take a job or not. Best Wishes, ...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, besides, furthermore, honestly, if, so, well, while, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 767.0 937.175257732 82% => OK
No of words: 168.0 206.0 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.56547619048 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60020574368 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64342888366 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 127.690721649 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.660714285714 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 243.9 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.9298643727 44.8134815571 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.7 76.5299724578 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8 16.8248392259 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.6 4.34317383033 175% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.29896907216 47% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 2.54639175258 393% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.307229674338 0.216113520407 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113191581428 0.0766984524023 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0705255157345 0.0603063233224 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.23248259111 0.12726935374 183% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0474884674669 0.0580467560999 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 8.37731958763 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.93 8.71597938144 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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