Essay topic 4

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, consequently, first, firstly, if, may, so, still, therefore, thus, in conclusion, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.5258426966 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 14.8657303371 114% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.3162921348 35% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 33.0505617978 33% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 58.6224719101 70% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2077.0 2235.4752809 93% => OK
No of words: 335.0 442.535393258 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.2 5.05705443957 123% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.55969084622 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.29219494573 2.79657885939 118% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 215.323595506 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.528358208955 0.4932671777 107% => OK
syllable_count: 639.9 704.065955056 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.59117977528 119% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.6235954879 60.3974514979 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.8125 118.986275619 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9375 23.4991977007 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.8125 5.21951772744 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 7.80617977528 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.328766450613 0.243740707755 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124115726827 0.0831039109588 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0749694562232 0.0758088955206 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.194720652965 0.150359130593 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0570891589093 0.0667264976115 86% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.2 14.1392134831 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 25.8 48.8420337079 53% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 12.1743820225 120% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 18.68 12.1639044944 154% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.81 8.38706741573 117% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 100.480337079 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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